In this disorganized letter, the writer lays out an incoherent and ultimately unconvincing argument, raising weak points and using unclear examples in an attempt to illustrate the superiority of Adams Realty.
We have two choices to amend this run-on sentence: rearrange it or break it into two different sentences. We’ve gone with rearrangement for this example. We have put the adjectives describing the letter and argument before those nouns and explained what the argument does in a modifying phrase set off by a comma.
Leadership ability is the elusive quality that our current government employees have yet to capture.
The first “sentence” here is a fragment. Fortunately, it can easily be incorporated into the following complete sentence, as the pronoun “that” refers to “Leadership ability.”