Table 4. Emendations to the Copy Text
Page.Line |
As Printed |
As Corrected |
Authority |
(3.10) 3.10 |
Ode on a Grecian Urn |
“Ode on a Grecian Urn” |
title |
(5.23) 5.8 |
Hodos Chameliontos |
Hodos Chameliontos |
terminology |
(7.4) 6.10 |
Sant’ Ambrogio |
Sant’Ambrogio |
proper name |
(7.12) 6.16 |
God Save the King |
‘God Save the King’ |
title |
(7.12) 6.17 |
He’s a Jolly Good Fellow |
‘He’s a Jolly Good Fellow’ |
title |
(12.18) 10.11 |
Cabalistic |
Cabbalistic |
GY in YL 2434 |
(12.19) 10.13 |
Cabala |
Cabbala |
GY in YL 2434 |
(17.11) 13.27 |
Tolstoi’s |
Tolstoy’s |
standard Anglicization |
(22.21) 17.23 |
Daimon. |
Daimon. |
terminology |
(22.22) 17.24 |
Daimon |
Daimon |
terminology |
(22.26) 17.27 |
Daimon |
Daimon |
terminology |
(22.27) 17.28 |
Ghostly Self |
Ghostly Self |
terminology |
(23.26) 18.16 |
Cabala |
Cabbala |
see above 10.13 |
(24.3) 18.21 |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
(24.48) 19.10 |
pulsaters |
pulsation |
GY in YL 2435 |
(27.13) 20.24 |
Sea-shanties |
sea-shanties |
GY in YL 2434 |
(27.14) 20.24 |
Steam |
steam |
GY in YL 2434 |
(28.8) 21.9 |
eyes. |
eyes? |
GY in YL 2434 |
(28.24) 21.22 |
Crickmaa, |
Cruchmaa, |
GY in YL 2434 |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
|
(29.26) 22.20 |
wingéd |
wingèd |
standard diacritical mark |
(37.27) 27.8 |
Cabalistic |
Cabbalistic |
see above 10.11 |
(40.30) 29.24 |
Cabal-/ists |
Cabbalists |
see above 10.11 |
(59.7) 41.8 |
late risen moon, |
late-risen moon, |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(62.8) 44.19 |
perfected, completed, |
separate, perfect, |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(68.23) 50.20 |
Alcemon |
Alcmaeon |
proper name |
(70.29) 52.25 |
Theory of Mind as Pure Art |
Theory of Mind as Pure Act |
correct title |
(79.14) 59.3 |
Phase 28 |
Phase 15 |
WBY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(88.30) 65.28 |
negation. The whole |
negation, the whole |
GY in YL 2434 |
(89.11) 66.1 |
Faculties |
Faculties |
terminology |
(90.14) 66.26 |
Phase |
phase |
terminology |
(90.24) 66.34 |
Phase |
phase |
terminology |
(91.11) 67.13 |
Sec. XII |
Section XII |
GY in YL 2434 |
(97.r10.c3) 71.r10.c3 |
Mask |
Mask |
terminology |
(97.r12.c3) 72.r12.c3 |
Enforced law |
Enforced lure |
GY in YL 2434 |
(97.r13.c3) 72.r13.c3 |
antithetical |
antithetical |
terminology |
(98.r17.c1) 72.r17.c1 |
Daimon-/ic |
Daimon-/ic |
terminology |
(98.r20.c3) 73.r20.c3 |
constriction |
construction |
correct on 91.24 |
(99.r22.c4) 73.r22.c4 |
Temptation versus strength |
Temptation through strength |
GY in YL 2433a |
(99.r24.c4) 73.r24.c4 |
Enforced success in action |
Enforced success of action |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(102.1) 75.22 |
Affecting |
[nothing] |
repetition because of pagination |
quarter |
[nothing] |
repetition because of pagination |
|
(103.20) 77.16 |
Mask |
Mask |
terminology |
(103.21) 77.17 |
Mask |
Mask |
terminology |
(104.19) 78.17 |
OBJECTIVTIES |
OBJECTIVITIES |
missing letter |
(104.21) 78.19 |
Phase 29 |
Phase 28 |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(104.23) 78.21 |
Well. |
Will. |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(108.7) 81.20 |
phase, he |
phase he |
GY in YL 2434 |
(111.22) 84.10 |
life, where |
life where |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(112.3) 84.20 |
perfectly, a |
perfectly a |
GY in YL 2434 |
(114.6) 86.2 |
Image |
Image |
GY in YL 2434 |
(117.3) 88.7 |
Dostieffsky |
Dostoyevsky |
standard Anglicization |
(118.5) 88.34 |
Dostoieffsky’s |
Dostoyevsky’s |
standard Anglicization |
(118.6) 88.35 |
Dostoieffsky’s |
Dostoyevsky’s |
standard Anglicization |
(119.8) 89.28 |
true |
True |
terminology |
(119.10) 89.29 |
true |
True |
terminology |
(119.31) 90.8 |
sensuality |
Sensuality |
GY in YL 2434 |
(124.3) 93.9 |
table |
Tables |
GY in YL 2434 |
(124.26) 93.27 |
The Image-Burner |
The Consumer, Pyre-builder |
GY in YL 2434 |
(129.4) 96.29 |
Image |
Image |
see above 86.2 |
(129.11) 96.34 |
Sensuous Ego |
The Sensuous Man |
GY in YL 2434 |
“Eternal Idol” |
Eternal Idol |
title |
|
(136.24) 102.12 |
Celestial Body |
Celestial Body |
terminology |
(141.20) 105.31 |
Image |
Image |
see above 86.2 |
(142.33) 106.31 |
Image |
Image |
see above 86.2 |
(145.15) 108.24 |
antithetical |
antithetical |
terminology |
(145.20) 108.27 |
“An Ode to the West Wind” |
“Ode to the West Wind” |
title |
(147.15) 110.2 |
Head |
Head |
terminology |
(147.19) 110.5 |
Heart |
Heart |
terminology |
(147.22) 110.7 |
Head |
Head |
terminology |
(150.1) 111.35 |
Image |
Image |
see above 86.2 |
(151.3) 112.26 |
i |
in |
missing letter |
(153.30) 114.26 |
Luke |
Lake |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(154.19) 115.8 |
Self-adaption |
Self-adaptation |
GY in YL 2434 |
(155.26) 116.6 |
adaption |
adaptation |
GY in YL 2434 |
(156.5) 116.15 |
self-adaption |
self-adaptation |
GY in YL 2434 |
(156.16) 116.24 |
Dostoieffsky’s |
Dostoyevsky’s |
standard Anglicization |
(157.23) 117.20 |
The “breaking of strength” |
Temptation through Strength |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(157.26) 117.23 |
Dostieffsky |
Dostoyevsky |
standard Anglicization |
(160.27) 119.28 |
Dostieffsky |
Dostoyevsky |
standard Anglicization |
(162.26) 121.6 |
Dostieffsky |
Dostoyevsky |
standard Anglicization |
desire for a form |
desire for reform |
“Version B” (YVP 4:216). |
|
(189.2) 138.28 |
Primary |
primary |
terminology |
(190.26) 139.34 |
Aeslepius |
Asclepius |
proper name |
(192.8) 141.10 |
Faculties’ Mask |
Faculties, Mask |
raised comma |
(192.31) 141.32 |
The Inferno |
the Inferno |
title |
(196.21) 144.30 |
Phase, |
phase, |
terminology |
(196.23) 144.32 |
Phases |
phases |
terminology |
(196.28) 145.1 |
Phase |
phase |
terminology |
(199.9) 147.1 |
see p. 200 |
diagram below |
pagination of edition |
(199.11) 147.2 |
p. 79 |
p. 58 |
pagination of edition |
(201.2) 148.2 |
Phase |
phase |
terminology |
(203.5) 149.18 |
Nature |
“Nature” |
word used as word |
(203.6) 149.19 |
God |
“God” |
word used as word |
(209.6) 154.8 |
Leibnitz |
Leibniz |
proper name |
(211.4) 155.21 |
Aeslepius |
Asclepius |
proper name |
(212.14) 156.23 |
Dionysius |
Dionysus |
proper name |
(212.15) 156.24 |
Dionysius |
Dionysus |
proper name |
(215.11) 158.26 |
Zazuki’s |
Suzuki’s |
proper name |
(219.3) 159.4 |
PAUL VALERY in the Cimitière Marine |
Paul Valéry in the “Cimitière Marin” |
GY in YL 2434, title |
Cimitière Marine |
“Cimitière Marin” |
Alspach 1938, title |
|
(222.28) 162.2 |
Mandooka |
Mandookya |
GY in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(226.2) 164.16 |
Nature |
nature |
GY in YL 2434 |
(229.27) 167.14) |
Phase |
phase |
terminology |
(232.8) 169.5 |
Aeneids |
Enneads |
GY in YL 2434 |
(233.30) 169.37 |
that is not him |
and it is not he |
GY in YL 2434 |
(239.20) 174.23 |
Simon |
Simeon |
proper name |
(245.17) 179.2 |
before, the |
before the |
WBY? in YL 2434, GY in YL 2435 |
(247.23) 180.26 |
Philaus |
Philolaus |
proper name |
(250.13) 182.27 |
Immortalities |
Mortalities |
GY in YL 2434 |
(255.18) 186.24 |
Leibnitz |
Leibniz |
proper name |
(260.29) 190.31 |
Shru Purhoit |
Shree Purohit |
WBY? in YL 2434 |
(280.30) 204.9 |
Ravenne |
Ravenna |
GY in YL 2435 |
(287.9) 208.29 |
1005 |
1050 |
correct in The Historical Cones, p. 193 |
(287.31) 209.9 |
Villars de Honecourt |
Villard de Honnecourt |
proper name |
(291.8) 211.24 |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
(291.10) 211.26 |
Guercia |
Quercia |
proper name |
(293.21) 213.16 |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
(293.24) 213.18 |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
|
(294.6) 213.30 |
Michael Angelo |
Michelangelo |
proper name |
(299.12) 217.19 |
Tolstoi |
Tolstoy |
standard Anglicization |
(300.2) 217.38 |
Tolstoi |
Tolstoy |
standard Anglicization |
(301.29) 219.23 |
Cabalists. |
Cabbalists. |
see above 10.11 |
(302.9) 219.31 |
thirteenth sphere |
Thirteenth Cone |
Coole proofs |
Table 5. End-of-Line Word Division in the Copy Text
Page.Line this edition |
Reading in this edition] |
Reading in copy text |
Page.Line in copy text |
5.21 |
four-storied] |
four-/ storied |
6.5 |
16.8 |
breakdown] |
break-/ down |
20.23 |
19.14 |
overwhelmed] |
over-/ whelmed |
25.3 |
26.18 |
upstanding] |
up-/ standing |
36.25 |
29.26 |
whirlpool] |
whirl-/ pool |
40.32 |
31.34 |
cigarette-case] |
cigarette-/ case |
44.3 |
32.19 |
horror-struck] |
horror-/ struck |
44.31 |
38.18 |
good-bye] |
good-/ bye |
53.16 |
58.17 |
twenty-eight] |
twenty-/ eight |
79.8 |
61.3 |
steel-like] |
steel-/ like |
82.11 |
62.7 |
stage-manager] |
stage-/ manager |
84.1 |
62.19 |
self-expression] |
self-/ expression |
84.16 |
67.30 |
self-realization] |
self-/ realization |
91.30 |
72.r18.c4 |
Hunchback] |
Hunch-/ back |
98.r18.c4 |
89.1 |
twenty-eight] |
twenty-/ eight |
118.7 |
95.17 |
self-hatred] |
self-/ hatred |
127.10 |
106.31 |
nightmare] |
night-/ mare |
142.32 |
107.9 |
shell-strewn] |
shell-/ strewn |
143.18 |
107.14 |
supernatural] |
super-/ natural |
143.23 |
self-knowledge] |
self-/ knowledge |
148.20 |
|
115.3 |
lawgiver] |
law-/ giver |
154.13 |
115.8 |
Self-/ adaptation] |
Self-/ adaption |
154.19 |
116.9 |
self-analysing] |
self-/ analysing |
155.29 |
116.15 |
self-adaptation] |
self-/ adaption |
156.5 |
120.7 |
subconscious] |
sub-/ conscious |
161.14 |
126.29 |
subconscious] |
sub-/ conscious |
170.18 |
131.28 |
self-expression] |
self-/ expression |
177.13 |
132.21 |
self-regarding] |
self-/ regarding |
178.17 |
147.11 |
hour-glass] |
hour-/ glass |
200.2 |
147.19 |
twenty-eight] |
twenty-/ eight |
200.11 |
148.5 |
superimposed] |
super-/ imposed |
201.6 |
148.24 |
twenty-six] |
twenty-/ six |
202.6 |
153.12 |
Jupiter-Saturn] |
Jupiter-/ Saturn |
208.2 |
156.21 |
supernat-/ ural] |
super-/ natural |
212.12 |
159.12 |
self-hate] |
self-/ hate |
219.12 |
161.30 |
séance-room] |
séance-/ room |
222.17 |
168.10 |
seventeenth-century] |
seventeenth-/ century |
231.2 |
172.12 |
re-/ birth] |
re-/ birth |
236.16 |
177.24 |
mankind] |
man-/ kind |
243.27 |
178.19 |
eye-doctor] |
eye-/ doctor |
244.25 |
178.24 |
son-in-law] |
son-/ in-law |
245.1 |
187.31 |
slow-moving] |
slow-/ moving |
257.5 |
191.18 |
counter-myth] |
counter-/ myth |
262.3 |
197.24 |
break-up] |
break-/ up |
271.21 |
200.2 |
Neo-Pythagorean] |
Neo-/ Pythagorean |
274.31 |
201.12 |
dancing-master] |
dancing-/ master |
276.27 |
204.9 |
to-day] |
to-/ day |
280.29 |
209.9 |
sketchbook] |
sketch-/ book |
287.30 |
209.22 |
supernatural] |
super-/ natural |
288.13 |
210.4 |
autobiography] |
auto-/ biography |
289.4 |