And here is a play on Edward Thomas’s haunting poem, “Adelstrop,” so utterly memorable for its pastoral invocation and the name of the railway siding. This poem deals with the kind of persistent announcements in railway stations that would have been so unnecessary in Thomas’s day: “If you see anything that does not look right, report it.” We know what they mean, but do they really mean this? The poem begins on a note of sympathy for those modern Dantean wraiths, commuters.
adelstrop revisited
Familiar enough to each other,
After years of silent journeys
Unaware, though, of who exactly
Is who, or what brings each
To this daily shared procession,
They hear but do not hear
The official voice announces:
Should you see anything
That does not look right,
Report it. No one does,
And yet everything, to my eye,
Looks wrong, and therefore is not right;
It is not right that people
Should be indifferent
To one another; should not know
Who the other is, nor care, it seems;
It is not right that so many lives
Should pass in this way, bound
To a Sisyphean schedule
Of never-ending travel;
It is not right, it seems,
That there should not be time
To look at the sky, to stop
And walk slowly and breathe
The morning air before
Staleness sets in. None of that
Looks right; I report it,
And wait for a response,
And wait, and all the birds
Of Oxfordshire return and briefly sing.