Walt Whitman’s Revisions

“Transcendent! New! An American bard at last!”
(written about himself and his major life work, Leaves of Grass)

Trim the grass

Feed the grass

Water the grass

Direct the grass

This parched lawn        needs attention

What started as skinny chapbook

of twelve poems

grew into four hundred

in forty years

Who has such fortitude?

Walt was always working on the same book

First edition did not

have his name on cover

He reviewed himself in newspapers anonymously

quoted Ralph Waldo Emerson

without permission

on the spine

Emerson was not thrilled

Take a breath

Full breath

That’s what I call a poet