Concerning the Proper Term for a Whale Exhaling

Poof my mother sighs

as against the clearcut banks near Hoonah

another humpback exhales, its breath

white and backlit by sun.

                                                    Don’t

say that, says my father, disapproving

of such casual terminology or uneasy

with the tinge of pink tulle, the flounce

poof attaches to the thing we’re watching, beast

of hunt, of epic migrations.

                                                    But I’m the naturalist,

suggesting course and speed for approach. They

are novices, and the word is mine,

brought here from the captains I sailed for

and the glittering Cape Cod town

where we docked each night

after a day of watching whales.

                                                                 Poof,

Todd or Lumby would gutter,

turning the helm, my cue to pick up

the microphone. Coming from those smoke-roughed cynics

who call the whales dumps, rank the tank-topped talent

on the bow, and say each time they set a breaching calf

in line with the setting sun, What do you think of that? Now that’s

what I call pretty, then sit back,

light a cigarette—coming from them,

I loved the word.

                                       And even more

because the dock we returned to each night

teemed with summer crowds, men lifting

their hands to other men, the town

flooded with poufs free to flutter, to cry, as they can’t

in Newark or Pittsburgh or Macon, to let

their love rise into the clear, warm air,

to linger and glow

for a brief time visible.