It was a very warm morning in the Via Colonna, for many weeks had passed, and May was coming on: it was a warm morning, and Hiram was plodding away drearily by himself at his heroic picture of the Capture of Babylon, with a stalwart young Roman from the Campagna sitting for his model of the Persian leader, when the door unexpectedly opened, and a quiet-looking old gentleman entered suddenly, alone and unannounced. This was one of Hiram’s days of deepest despondency, and he was heartily sorry for the untimely interruption. ‘Mr. Churchill sent me to look at your pictures.’ the stranger said in explanation, in a very soft, pleasant voice. ‘He told me I might possibly see some things here that were really worth the looking at.’
Poor Hiram sighed somewhat wearily. ‘Churchill has too good an opinion altogether of my little attempts,’ he said in all sincerity.
‘I’m afraid you’ll find very little here that’s worthy your attention. May I venture to ask your name?’
‘Never mind my name, sir,’ the old gentleman said, with a blandness that contrasted oddly with the rough wording of his brusque sentences. ‘Never you mind my name, I say, — what’s that to you, pray? My name’s not at all in question. I’ve come to see your pictures.’
‘Are you a dealer, perhaps?’ Hiram suggested, with another sigh at his own excessive frankness in depreciating what was after all his bread and butter — and a great deal more to him. ‘You want to buy possibly?
‘No, I don’t want to buy,’ the old gentleman answered flatly, with a certain mild and kindly fierceness. ‘I don’t want to buy certainly. I’m not a dealer; I’m an art-critic.’
‘Oh, indeed,’ Hiram said politely. The qualification is not one usually calculated to endear a visitor to a struggling young artist.
‘And you, I should say by your accent, are an American. That’s bad, to begin with. What on earth induced you to leave that cursed country of yours? Oh generation of vipers — don’t misinterpret that much-mistaken word generation; it means merely son or offspring — who has warned you to flee from the wrath that is?’
Hiram smiled in spite of himself. ‘Myself,’ he said; ‘my own inner prompting only.’
‘Ha, that’s better; so you fled from it.
You escaped from the city of destruction. You saved yourself from Sodom and Gomorrah. Well, well, having had the misfortune to be born an American, what better thing could you possibly do? Creditable, certainly, very creditable. And now, since you have come to Rome to paint, pray what sort of wares have you got to show me?’
Hiram pointed gravely to the unfinished Capture of Babylon.
‘It won’t do,’ the old gentleman said decisively, after surveying the principal figures with a critical eye through his double eyeglass. ‘Oh, no, it won’t do at all. It’s painted — I admit that; it’s painted, solidly painted, which is always something nowadays, when coxcombs go splashing their brushes loosely about a yard or two of blank canvas, and then positively calling it a picture. It’s painted, there’s no denying it. Still, my dear sir, you’ll excuse my saying so, but there’s really nothing in it — absolutely nothing. What does it amount to, after all? A line farrago of tweedledum and tweedledee, in Assyrian armour and Oriental costume, and other unnatural, incongruous upholsterings, with a few Roman models stuck inside it all, to do duty instead of lay figures. Do you really mean to tell me, now, you think that was what the capture of Babylon actually looked like? Why, my dear sir, speaking quite candidly, I assure you, for my own part I much prefer the Assyrian bas-reliefs.’
Hiram’s heart sank horribly within him. He knew it, he knew it; it was all an error, a gigantic error. He had mistaken a taste for painting for a genius for painting. He would never, never, never make a painter; of that he was now absolutely certain. He could have sat down that moment with his face between his hands and cried bitterly, even as he had done years before when the deacon left him in the peppermint lot, but for the constraining presence of that mild-mannered ferocious oddly-compounded old gentleman.
‘Is this any better?’ he asked humbly, pointing with his brush-handle to the Second Triumvirate.
‘No sir, it is not any better,’ the relentless critic answered as fiercely yet as blandly as ever. ‘In fact, if it comes to that, it’s a great deal worse. Look at it fairly in the face and ask yourself what it all comes to. It’s a group of three amiable sugar-brokers in masquerade costume discussing the current price-lists, and it isn’t even painted, though it’s by way of being finished, I suppose, as people paint nowadays. Is that drawing, for example,’ and he stuck his forefinger upon young Cæsar’s foreshortened foot, ‘or that, or that, or that, or that, sir? Oh, no, no; dear me, no. This is nothing like either drawing or colouring. The figure, my dear sir — you’ll excuse my saying so, but you haven’t the most rudimentary conception even of drawing or painting the human figure.’
Hiram coincided so heartily at that moment in this vigorous expression of adverse opinion, that but for Gwen he could have pulled out his pocket-knife on the spot and made a brief end of a life long failure.
But the stranger only went coolly through the studio piece by piece, passing the same discouraging criticisms upon everything he saw, and after he had finally reduced poor Hiram to the last abyss of unutterable despair, he said pleasantly in his soft, almost womanly voice, ‘Well, well, these are all sad trash, sad trash certainly. Not worth coming from America to Rome to paint, you must admit; certainly not. Who on earth was blockhead enough to tell you that you could ever possibly paint the figure? I don’t understand this. Churchill’s an artist; Churchill’s a sculptor; Churchill knows what a human body’s like, he’s no fool, I know. What the deuce did he send me here for, I wonder? How on earth could he ever have imagined that those stuffed Guy Fawkeses and wooden marionettes and dancing fantoccini were real living men and women? Preposterous, preposterous. Stay. Let me think. Churchill said something or other about your trying landscape. Have you got any landscapes, young man, got any landscapes?’
‘I’ve a few back here,’ Hiram answered timidly, ‘but I’m afraid they’re hardly worth your serious consideration. They were mostly done before I left America, with very little teaching, or else on holidays here in Europe, in the Tyrol chiefly, without much advice or assistance from competent masters.’
‘Bring them out!’ the old gentleman said in a tone of command. ‘Produce your landscapes. Let’s see what this place America is like, this desert of newfangled towns without, any castles.’
Hiram obeyed, and brought out the poor little landscapes, sticking them one after another on the easel in the light. There were the Thousand Island sketches, and the New York lakes, and the White Mountains, and a few pine-clad glens and dingles among the Tyrolese uplands and the lower Engadine. The stranger surveyed them all attentively through his double eyeglass with a stony critical stare, but still said absolutely nothing. Hiram stood by in breathless expectation. Perhaps the landscapes might fare better at this mysterious person’s unsparing hands than the figure pieces. But no: when he had finished, the stranger only said calmly, ‘Is that all?’
‘All, all,’ Hiram murmured in blank despair. ‘The work of my lifetime.’
The stranger looked at him steadily.
‘Young man,’ he said with the voice and manner of a Hebrew prophet, ‘believe me, you ought never to have come away from your native America.’
‘I know it, I know it,’ Hiram cried, in the profoundest depth of self-abasement.
‘No, you ought never to have come away from America. As I wrote years ago in the Seven Domes of Florence — —’
‘What!’ Hiram exclaimed, horror-stricken.
‘The Seven Domes of Florence! Then — then — then you are Mr. Truman?’
‘Yes,’ the stranger went on unmoved, without heeding his startled condition. ‘My name is John Truman, and, as I wrote years ago in the Seven Domes of Florence — —’
Hiram never heard the end of his visitor’s long sonorous quotation from his former self (in five volumes), for he sank back unmanned into an easy-chair, and fairly moaned aloud in the exceeding bitterness of his disappointment.
John Truman! It was he, then, the great art-critic of the age; the man whose merest word, whose slightest breath could make or mar a struggling reputation; the detector of fashionable shams, the promoter of honest artistic workmanship — it was he that had pronounced poor Hiram’s whole life a miserable failure, and had remitted him remorselessly once more to the corn and potatoes of Geauga County. The tears filled Hiram’s eyes as he showed the great man slowly and regretfully out of his studio; and when that benevolent beaming face had disappeared incongruously with the parting Parthian shot, ‘Go back to your woods and forests, sir; go back immediately to your woods and forests,’ Hiram quite forgot the very presence of the decked-out Persian commander, and burst into hot tears such as he had not shed before since he ran away to nurse his boyish sorrows alone by himself in the old familiar blackberry bottom.
How very differently he might have felt if only he could have followed that stooping figure down the Via Colonna and heard the bland old gentleman muttering audibly to himself, ‘Oh, dear no, the young barbarian ought never to have come away from his native America. No castles — certainly not, but there’s nature there clearly, a great deal of nature; and he knows how to paint it too, he knows how to paint it. Great purity of colouring in his Tyrolese sketches; breadth and brilliancy very unusual in so young an artist; capital robust drawing; a certain glassy liquid touch that I like about it all, too, especially in the water. Who on earth ever told him to go and paint those incomprehensible Assyrian monstrosities? Ridiculous, quite ridiculous. He ought to have concentrated himself on his own congenial lakes and woodlands. He has caught the exact spirit of them — weird, mysterious, solemn, primitive, unvulgarised, antidemotic, titanic, infinite. The draughtsmanship of the stratification in the rocks is quite superb in its originality. Oh, dear no, he ought never to have come away at all from his native natural America.