I didn’t like our new home, but my mum said that it would grow on me. I wasn’t sure about that. I thought that it was too flat, the hills a distant blur of blue. The village lay low and soggy. The grass in between the apple trees was puddled with wet and not only after it rained. It was late November now and everything was brown and grey. The trees looked as though someone had taken a black pen and drawn them against the sky. They were alder and willow and ash, Mum told me, and in the spring a man would go around with a machine and give the willows a haircut, until they looked like the ugly heads of old bald men. This was because willow grows too fast, she said.
“How do you know?” I asked her.
“Because I lived near here when I was a little girl, like you, Hannah. A bit younger, maybe – I was only ten when we moved away. I lived with my grandmother, your great-grandmother. She had a cottage in a village called Oddmore, which is on the other side of Taunton.”
“Does she still live there?” I was curious. I hadn’t known my nan, let alone a great-grandmother.
“No, she died years ago.”
“Why did you live with her?”
“Because my mother couldn’t look after me and then she died, too.”
“Why couldn’t she look after you?”
“She was ill.”
“What was the matter with her?”
My mother sighed. “She had a problem with drinking.”
“Oh.” It was the first time we’d had this sort of conversation. I suppose it meant that I was old enough to understand, but I wasn’t sure I liked that. “Did you like it there?”
“Yes, after a bit. At first I didn’t. I thought the village was too small and nothing ever happened, especially after London, although we didn’t live in a very nice part of the city. But there was a lot going on. I suppose these days you’d say I was a street kid.”
“It’s not like Bristol, either. Here, I mean.”
“No, it’s not, but you’ll get used to it. It’s a different kind of life.”
I suppose it had worked before, for my mum, so she thought it might work again. But I was not sure that I would come to like it. The village was not a pretty one, but built of mainly modern houses. Ours was older, a proper cottage, but it was also damp and there were slugs in the kitchen in the mornings. Mum said they crawled up the pipe. I had to go to school on the bus but it was nearly the end of term and everyone already had their own friends. And they were all white: only one other girl was like me. I got tired of explaining that my dad’s dad had been Jamaican, although actually they weren’t horrible about it, just didn’t seem to really get it.
So at the weekends I moped about the house, and eventually, on the third Sunday, my mother told me to go out and get some fresh air.
“You’re always on that computer.”
“I like the computer. I’ve got tons of friends on Facebook. And I’ve got to do my homework.”
My mum looked amused. “You’re not usually so keen on your homework.”
“But Mum, this is for history. It’s about the ancient Egyptians.” I fingered the looped cross around my neck. My ankh: I never took it off. Sometimes I thought it was an anchor, as well an ankh. Linking me back to the past. My dad had left it with my mum when I was a baby, for me. It was silver. And Dad had loved anything to do with Egypt, she’d told me. He saw it as part of his ancestry: even though my grandad’s family had come from Jamaica, the Egyptians had been a great African civilisation, he’d said. So I felt that the ankh was my link to him.
But it was no use protesting. I put on some wellingtons and went out through the gate into the orchard, and puddled about in the wet grass. There were apples, but something had chewed holes in them and they smelled cidery, which I didn’t like. I went through the orchard, and found that the end of it led onto a field. There was a small brown pony, so I walked down the slope towards it and the long line of bushes at the bottom of the field. When I looked back, I was surprised at how invisible the village had become: I’d thought that all the houses and their gardens went back much further, but it was like being in the middle of nowhere. The bushes had long black thorns like iron nails and I didn’t want to get too close. When I reached the place where the pony had been, it had gone.
I looked around. There was a hollow in the bushes. I thought the pony must shelter underneath them, so I ducked under and saw the pony some distance away, making its way through the maze of bushes without any hurry. At the bottom of the hill was a trickle of a stream only a few feet wide. I could follow it, I thought.
I could be an explorer.
Sometimes, I thought my dad was an explorer. Like Indiana Jones, in my mum’s old movies. Off in the rainforest somewhere, talking to jaguars, or finding his way through a pyramid, looking for treasure. But inside I knew where my dad was: in the ground, long gone. My mum had said it was cancer but it wasn’t. I’d found his certificate, which they give you when you die, and it said overdose. But it made me think all the more of my mum, that she’d tried to protect me, that it had been a struggle. My dad and my nan. It was the same thing, really.
The stream was winding, twisting through the thorn bushes. After a while, the thorn trees grew less thickly and after I’d climbed over a broken barbed wire fence, I came out into a small, bare valley, with slopes where the sheep had cropped the grass and gorse growing on the hill like sunlight. I kept following the stream, but I kept an eye on the sun, too, like a proper explorer would: it floated through the clouds like a ten pence piece. At one point, I climbed the hill, which wasn’t really a hill, but just the slope of a field, and looked back; I saw the tower of the village church and I knew that as long as I could see it, I could find my way home.
Twenty minutes later and I could hear water. It was not like the trickle of the stream, but a steady rushing noise and it puzzled me: surely the hills were not steep enough for a waterfall? Then I came around a bend and saw that it was what’s called a sluice. The stream was channelled, it poured through a gate like water out of a kettle into a much wider stream. Except that it wasn’t a stream, really, but a canal: maybe fifteen feet wide, and very still. Past the place where the water flowed in, which was foamy and white, the canal looked like oil. The slope of the fields tailed off onto flat land, banked by willows. There was a path, but it was marshy and reedy, with the tall bulrushes like spears all along it.
So I followed the path. There was something about the canal, but I couldn’t say what it was. I didn’t like it and yet I did, at the same time, as though it was pulling me on. I couldn’t help thinking about where it would end – maybe at the sea, although later I thought that this was stupid. It would probably join up with a river.
I walked for about an hour. I couldn’t seem to stop, as though my legs were mechanically taking me forward like a machine, and I sang as I walked: it was a song that my dad had written for me. As far as I knew it was the only thing he’d left – that, my name, and the ankh of course.
Hannah and roses, Hannah and flames,
Whatever who knows is, Hannah’s my name…
That’s how it began, and maybe it was silly, but it kept me going.
I’d never walked so far before, even though I’d been used to walking up one hill and down the other and up again in hilly Bristol, there and back to school. But this was different: flat, and the canal didn’t really change much, until I came to the gates.
When I saw them, I slowed down. At first, from far away, they appeared as a small black patch at the end of the canal. When I drew a bit closer, they looked like a doorway into the sky. They were huge, made of black metal, and they reared up above the motionless water of the canal. I could see some sort of mechanism – a wheel – set into the side of the gates, and probably this opened them. It did not look as if it had been moved for years. It looked painted shut, not rusty, just thick with black paint so that it shone, even though the sun was covered by the clouds.
I stood for a long time and looked at the gates. There didn’t seem to be any way around them, unless you climbed up the bank, which was quite steep. I listened, but I couldn’t hear any traffic, although there must be roads somewhere: I thought I was near Highbridge and that wasn’t far from the M5: you could hear the motorway from a long way away. Maybe it was so still because it was a Sunday.
A twig snapped and I turned. There was a man standing behind me. He made me jump, and for a moment, my heart banged in my chest. But he was old. He had a walking stick and in the brambles was a little old dog like a piece of a hearthrug. He had come down the slope: now that I looked more closely, I could see a tiny path.
“Afternoon,” he said. He sounded quite posh, like a retired teacher.
“I was looking at the gates,” I said.
“The King’s Drain.”
“Sorry?”
“It’s called the King’s Drain. It’s a sluice. Do you know what that is, young lady?”
“Yes. They explained it in school. It’s like a gate for keeping water in and out.”
He looked pleased. “That’s right. This one lets the water out at Highbridge. If there’s a high tide, though, they close the gates, because otherwise too much water will come in from the sea and flood up.”
“I saw a flood,” I said. “When we came here from Bristol. It was all over the road.”
He nodded. “Yes, that happens, sometimes. Most of this land is below sea level. That’s why it’s called ‘Somerset’. Before they put in all these drains and gates, it was flooded all winter – you could only graze cattle in the summer, you see, so it was called the ‘summer country’.”
That made sense. “That’s interesting,” I said.
He waved the stick at the gates. “They’re important, those. Keep the sea back. Well, I’d better be getting along or my wife will be wondering where I’ve got to.”
He gave me the polite smile that some grownups give to kids and called the dog on. I waited until he had gone further down the path and then I saw him cut up through another little path and disappear. It wasn’t that I hadn’t trusted him, actually, but I felt like being on my own. I didn’t want to leave the gates, but then it struck me that it would get dark soon and I didn’t like the thought of being on the towpath when I couldn’t see. So I went back, walking quickly and singing my dad’s song under my breath, along the canal, and the stream, and the field. I could feel the gates all the way, though, over my shoulder. It didn’t seem nearly as long on the way back: it doesn’t, if you’ve walked somewhere twice, I’ve noticed.
“Did you have a nice time?” my mum said, when I got in. “I was a bit worried. You were ages.”
“Yes. I went for a walk. But I took my phone.” I showed her.
“Where did you go?”
“Along the canal. I met a man who told me about the sluice at the end.”
She looked vague. “Oh, is there a sluice? I’d forgotten about the canal. It’s only a little one.”
“It’s called the King’s Drain.”
“I can’t remember which king it would have been.”
“He said it was to hold the sea back.”
And it was. But not just the sea.
* * *
That night, I woke up. I don’t know what woke me. But my heart was banging against my ribs again, and I felt light, as though I wasn’t real any more. I knew I had to go back to the gates.
Going out at night on my own was stupid, I know that. But it didn’t feel as though I had a choice. I dressed, and then I let myself out of the back door and ran through the orchard, and down the field, and into the thorns.
There was a full moon and the sky was full of stars. I hadn’t realised that there were so many. In Bristol, the sky is orange because of all the streetlights and you can only see a few, but now there were thousands of them. The moonlight cast sharp shadows; the thorn trees were blue and black. I’d been feeling a bit scared but now I was excited: it was like being out in a secret world, that no-one else ever saw.
Soon, I was at the canal. The light from the moon lay along the water like a path, a silver road, and the gates were at the end, but much bigger than they actually were, really huge, like a castle. I was still excited, but afraid, too, and I told myself I had to be brave. I followed the moon path, until the black gates loomed up in front of me and then I had to stop.
The light fell on the big wheel so that it was silver, too.
Open the gates. The voice was in my head; maybe I was going mad. But the thought didn’t bother me.
“I don’t know how.”
The wheel will open the gates.
There was a ledge, on which someone could stand to turn the wheel. So I hopped onto the ledge and put my hands on it. I had forgotten to bring gloves and the metal was frosty cold. It hurt my hands, but to my surprise the wheel span easily, really quickly, as though the slightest touch would send it whirling. I lifted my hands and the wheel spun until it was round like the moon and the gates began to open. I jumped down from the ledge.
Within the gates, everything was black. I couldn’t see the canal, or anything beyond and now I was really scared.
Go inside.
“I don’t want to.”
You must. And I felt my feet taking me forwards into the blackness.
As I did so, however, I saw that there was a tiny light, a little spark like a candle. It was as though there was a very small figure, carrying a tiny lantern, walking towards me.
“Who’s there?”
No answer.
“Who is it?” My voice sounded very small, too. Then the lantern flamed up and someone was standing in front of me, man-height. His skin shone in the light from the lantern and it was like the old mahogany chest of drawers that my mother had in her bedroom, whenever she polished it. There was a black cotton cloth around his hips and the gleam of gold. When I looked up, I saw that he had a dog’s head, like a Dobermann: long and dark-furred. His eyes had a little spark. I ought to have run screaming but all the fear drained away from me, as if out of a sluice.
“Who are you?” I said. But I knew. Anubis, the Egyptian god of the dead. The one who guides souls home.
“They’re waiting for you,” he said. I don’t know how he spoke, out of that dog’s face, but he did. It was the voice which had been talking to me. Without waiting, he turned as if he expected me to follow him and walked into the darkness. So I did.
I think there was water, still, but I couldn’t be sure. We walked for a short distance and sometimes it was as though the walls were metal, like bronze, and sometimes they were stone. At last the man with the dog’s head turned and said, “We are here. Do not speak unless someone speaks to you. And tell the truth.”
“Okay.” I wasn’t going to argue. I saw another door beyond his shoulder and then he opened it and guided me through.
I don’t remember a lot about the place beyond that. It was high, like a big cathedral, and it would have been dark except that it was lit by torches along the walls. There were people sitting on enormous stone thrones and I couldn’t see any of them clearly, but their skin was different colours – I don’t mean white or black or mixed like me, except for the dog-headed man, but blue and green and red, as if a child had coloured them in. They looked Egyptian, too: I knew they were gods, but the thought was too big to handle.
At the end of the room was a pair of scales, the size of a house. They were almost too huge to see, although I did wonder whether I myself had simply become very small. I still don’t know. In one of the pans of the scales, the left-hand one, there was a feather, as long as I was tall, curling and white.
In front of the scales sat a shadow. It was the size of a normal man, and it sat quite still, with its hands on its knees.
“Do you know who this is?” a voice said.
I couldn’t tell who was speaking.
“No.”
“His name is Zachary Upson. Do you know that name?”
I felt as though I’d suddenly stepped onto a ledge that was too high. I said, “Yes. He’s my dad. Was my dad. His name was Zachary but my mum says everyone called him Bardy because he liked writing songs and his mum was Irish. Where bards came from,” I added, in case, being Egyptian, they didn’t know. My fingers closed around the ankh at my throat.
At that, the shadow lifted its head. I didn’t remember my dad but I’d seen photos and a video that my mum had taken, when I was still a baby. So I knew it was really him, but he looked very young. He was young, I suppose. He’d only been thirty-one when he’d died. I don’t know why it had taken all this time for him to come here, but perhaps there was no time in this place.
“We’re ready for the weighing,” the voice said. I didn’t know what that meant but I’d been told to keep quiet unless I was spoken to, and whereas I might have disobeyed my mum or a teacher, this was different. Then the voice started speaking again and it was a list of everything my father had done: how he’d nicked things as a kid, and gone on to stealing cars, then drugs. Using, but dealing as well, bringing misery into other people’s lives. I listened and I didn’t say anything. It wasn’t good. I hadn’t known about any of it; my mother had kept all that from me and I was grateful, but also angry. I didn’t know what to think.
As each of his crimes was spoken, a weight dropped, leaden and black, into the right-hand pan of the scales and it sank lower and lower. At last the voice finished – names, dates, convictions – and the sad-eyed dog-headed man turned to me and said:
“Now it is your turn, Hannah Rose. What do you know that is good, about this man, your father?”
The trouble was, he’d gone off when I was still a baby. Hadn’t been able to cope, my mum said. Left her completely in the lurch and she hadn’t been able to go back to her own mum, because my nan was dead by then. She must have been so alone. And yet, Bardy was my dad, and here was his shade, looking at me with a hope in his face that hurt.
I said, “He gave me my name. Hannah, because it was his mum’s name. And he left me with this.” I held up the ankh and they all leaned forwards, as if to look at it more closely. “And a song. For me. He wrote it for me.”
There in the hall, with the great torches flickering fire over the walls, I sang my song in a little quivery voice, and the shadow before me grew more solid and at the end of the room, the scales shuddered. Slowly, very slowly, the pan that held the feather began to sink, against the weights, until the feather came to rest against the floor and the black weights were no longer visible.
My dad’s figure wasn’t shadowy any more. It was filled with light and it became brighter and brighter until it was gone, but I could see that he was smiling. There was an opening in the air behind him, a doorway shaped like a cross with a loop at the top, like my ankh. He stepped through it and when he disappeared, the torches began to go out, one by one, and as the last one guttered I was in total darkness. I think I yelled, but the dark swallowed the sound. Then I saw that an eye was staring at me, a huge white eye, and a moment later I realised that it was the moon. There was no sign of the hall, or the great figures, or the dog-headed man. I was standing in front of the gates, but the sluice looked different. It was much smaller, and made of grey metal like the little sluice further down the canal. I could not see the wheel. I wondered whether the gates opened into other worlds, other lands of the dead, and my dad had gone to the one he loved best. But I knew that whatever the gates looked like, they were not just to hold back the sea.
If this had been a dream, I suppose this was the point at which I woke up. But it was not a dream. I was stiff and frozen, the reeds crackled with frost, the moon was on fire in the coldness of the sky, and the canal smelled of weed and water. I trudged home along the towpath, and sang my song as I went. The pony whickered to me when I came up the slope of the field. The orchard no longer seemed unfriendly, with things lurking behind the apple trees, and when I lifted the latch on the back door, the sky was already growing brighter in the east. There were flowers of frost on the windowpane. I did not go to bed, but sat in a chair by my bedroom window and watched the sun come up over the blaze of the world after the darkness of the night.