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Chapter 22

WRITING A
THANK-YOU NOTE

Knowing when to write a thank-you note is easy: you write a thank-you note whenever someone does something really nice for you or gives you a gift.

Knowing how to write a thank-you note is a little bit harder, but once you’ve got the hang of it, you’ll want to make a habit of it. Expressing your appreciation for something in a brief but sincere note isn’t something you outgrow. In fact, it’s a skill and a courtesy that will become even more important as you get older and need to acknowledge graduation gifts, job interviews, and wedding presents.

A well-written personal note always impresses people—whether that person is your grandmother, your best friend’s parents, or the person you hope to call your boss. It especially stands out when the habits of more casual correspondence have made thank-you notes seem exceptional. Being exceptional is always a good thing.

YOU DO

Write a thank-you note for a gift you’ve received.

YOU DON’T

Think that saying “thank you” in person when you receive the gift is enough or that texting “thx!” will take care of it.

Why

If someone has taken the time and effort to choose and purchase a gift for you, the most meaningful way to respond is to express your appreciation in writing.

YOU DO

Write your thank-you notes as promptly as possible.

YOU DON’T

Think that because you have procrastinated for a month or more after your birthday, there’s no sense in sending a note so late.

Why

Sooner is better than later, but late is better than never. If a month has gone past since you received the watch from your grandmother, you might start with a quick apology for your tardiness, and even make a little joke about how you hope it makes you more timely. You do not say, “I’ve been so busy, I didn’t have time.” You don’t need to offer an excuse, just an apology.

YOU DO

Write your friend’s parents a thank-you note for taking you to the beach with them for spring break.

YOU DON’T

Write your friend’s mother a thank-you note for giving you a ride home from the movie.

Why

Some things—like a ride home or asking you to stay for pizza with the family—are simply considerations that people do for others in the course of daily life. Bringing you along for a vacation, taking you as their guest to a really nice restaurant, or inviting you to use one of the family’s football season tickets are all special, and should be acknowledged as such.

YOU DO

Say something personal and specific in your thank-you note.

YOU DON’T

Write something that sounds like a form letter for which you have filled in the blanks.

Why

People want to know that their gift or gesture has made an impression on you in some way. Writing “Dear Aunt Molly, Thank you for the gift you sent me. Sincerely, Anna Belle” is impersonal and vague.

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A lady handwrites a thank-you note on a note card or stationery, not on a piece of paper torn out of a notebook.

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A lady uses her best handwriting, even if that means printing. An illegible note can lead to miscommunication or even a headache for the person attempting to read it.


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Here are a couple of examples you can use as guidelines.

Dear Grandma,

I love the sweater you made me for Christmas! Whenever I wear something you knitted, I get so many compliments on it, and I know this sweater will be admired too. Thank you so much for all the work you put into it. I will think of you every time I wear it.

Love,
Anna Belle



Dear Mr. and Mrs. Green,

I had the best time at the beach with your family during spring break. I love looking at all the photos Susan and I took and seeing how much fun we had. Thank you so much for including me and making me feel so welcome. I will always remember it.

Sincerely,
Anna Belle Carter



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Dear Uncle Bob,

Thank you so much for the generous check you sent for my birthday. I am saving up to buy a laptop computer and your check will go toward that goal. It was very thoughtful of you to remember my day. I hope to see you soon.

Love,
Anna Belle