Eleven Dawns with Su Tung-p’o

1

On my seventieth birthday reading Su Tung-p’o

in the predawn dark waiting for the first birdcall.

“I’m a tired horse unharnessed at last,” he said.

Our leaders say “connect the dots” but the dots

are the 10,000 visible stars above me.

2

Morning. Twenty-five degrees. Heavy frost descending

at 6:30 AM. The only sound the whisper

of green hackberry leaves falling,

a deep green carpet under each tree.

First bird, a canyon wren.

Sky azure, sun-gold mountain.

My ears not frozen shut,

my one eye open

to this morning in a cold world.

3

At dawn my mind chattered like

seven schoolgirls,

seven pissed-off finches at the feeder,

seven ravens chasing the gray hawk.

How to calm it down? Let the creek

run through it from ear to ear.

You can’t expect anything.

Even dawn is a presumption.

More raptors this year after two

good monsoons. I found a lush

and hidden valley I couldn’t bear

to enter today. It frightened me

as if it might be home to new species

of creatures God had forgotten to invent.

The old man is also a timid boy.

5

On solstice dawn I’m an old brat

lifting a hundred mental bandages.

Mt. Everest is covered with climbers’ junk

and a golf club was left behind on the moon,

the East suffocates in malice and the West

in pink cotton candy. Sixty years ago

my brother told me that the rain was angel piss

and that turtles might kill me when I swam.

The solstice says “everything on earth is True.”

6

Waiting for the light. I stand by her door

listening for breath. We’ve had 18,000 nights

but one of us will go first. The big moon

speaks to me with the silence

of a sleeping dog. First bird, the canyon wren.

I hear her say to her dog Mary, “Move over.”

Press the coffee button, December 24, with the moon

the bright eyeball of a god. For a couple of

million years people were outside

and now they’re mostly inside. Had Su Tung-p’o

heard of Jesus from the trade routes exchanging

gunpowder and pasta? He knew the true wilderness

is the soul which doesn’t wear

the old shoes of time and space.