THE PINE WOODS NOTEBOOK
To my late friend Michel Pontremoli
EN MASSE
THE PLEASURE OF PINE WOODS
August 7, 1940
The pleasure of pine woods:
One can roam about at ease there (among tall trunks that look something between bronze and rubber). They are well-stripped. Of all low branches. There’s no anarchy, no tangle of vines, no encumbrance. One can sit right down there, stretch out at ease. A carpet prevails over it all. A few stray rocks supply furnishings, a few flowers hug the ground. A purportedly healthy atmosphere prevails, a discreet and tasteful scent, a vibrant yet gently pleasing musicality.
The great violet masts, still encrusted with lichen and bark that’s furrowed, scaley.
Their branches strip off and the trunks slough their bark.
These great trunks, all of a perfectly defined species. These tall African masts, or at very least Creole.
August 7, 1940 – Afternoon
Easy roaming about between these tall masts, African or at very least Creole, their bark and lichen reaching midway up, solemn as bronze, supple as rubber.
(I wouldn’t say robust, as that adjective generally refers to another tree species.)
No tangle of cords, none of vines, no floorboards but deep carpets on the ground.
Robust refers more to another sort of tree, yet the pine is so nonetheless, though more than any other it can bend without breaking . . .
A shaft and a cone and its conical fruit.
August 8, 1940
Amid the profusion . . . At the base of these great masts, African or at very least Creole, there are no entanglements, no encumbrance of vines or ropes, no washed floorboards on the ground, but a deep carpet.
From the base to midway up, crinkled and lichen-cloaked . . .
Not one snaking vine or cord to hamper the stroller amid the profusion of these great trunks, African or at very least Creole, from base to midway up still lichen-cloaked.
Stripped of branches (to midway up), both by their own single-minded concern for the green peak (the green cone of their peak) and by the grave obscurity devised jointly in their midst . . .
That’s how it happens that even birds are relegated to the heights.
They’re marvelous, these jade carpets, in this terrain where it would seem that all vegetal interest had been withdrawn, where all low branches had fallen dead en masse.
Isn’t the pine the tree that makes the most dead wood? That abandons the greatest number of its limbs, the greater part of itself, that loses interest in itself most totally, withdrawing all sap for the sole advantage of the peak (the green cone)? Whence this odor of sanctity that pervades the vicinity of the trunks . . .
It flares up only at the very peak: somewhat like a candle.
It’s a powerfully aromatic tree, and not only through its flower.
August 9, 1940
It very gently relegates to great heights the effects of wind, of birds and even butterflies. And the vibrant concert of myriad insects.
Senile in appearance, hoary as the beards of aged Africans.
It’s very pleasant underneath all of this, while at the peaks something very gently swaying and musical takes place, very gently vibrating.
Through all this outgrowth (shedding as they go, but no matter) the shaft of the pine must persist and be perceived.
Like masts from base to midway up
All crinkled, lichen-cloaked like an elderly Creole,
With no constraint of lianas or cords between them.
That wind sifts through, that filter the light . . .
Not sails spread taut, but densely packed fruit
Like pineapples . . .
August 9, 1940 – Evening
No!
I decidedly must turn back to the pleasure of the pine woods.
What is it made of, this pleasure? – Primarily, this: the pine woods is a chamber in nature, made from trees all belonging to one clearly defined species; a well-delimited space, generally quite deserted, where one finds shelter from the sun, from the wind, from visibility; but not absolute shelter, not in isolation. No. It is a relative shelter. Shelter that’s not secretive, not stealthy, a noble shelter.
It’s also a place (this is particular to pine woods) where one can roam about at ease, without underbrush, without branches grazing the head, where one can stretch out on dry ground, not spongy, quite comfortably.
Each pine wood is like a natural sanatorium, also a music hall . . . a chamber, a vast cathedral for meditation (fortunately a cathedral without a pulpit) open to all winds, but through so many doors it’s as though they were closed. For winds hesitate before them.
Oh respectable columns, senile masts!
Aged columns, temple of caducity.
Nothing whimsical but such salubrious comfort, such tempering of the elements, such a music chamber discreetly scented, discreetly adorned, set up for serious strolling and meditation.
Everything is set up without excess, for leaving man to his own devices. Vegetation and animation relegated to the heights. Nothing to distract the eyes. Everything to lull him to sleep, with this proliferation of similar columns. No anecdotes. Everything here discourages curiosity. But all of this almost unintentionally, and in the midst of nature, with no clear separation, no deliberate isolation, with no sweeping gestures, nothing that jars.
Here and there, a solitary rock further deepens the quality of this solitude, compelling gravity.
O natural sanatorium, cathedral fortunately without pulpit, chamber where the music is so
to the heights (at once so wild and so delicate), chamber of music or meditation – a place made for leaving man alone in the midst of nature, to his thoughts, to pursue a thought . . .
. . . To return your courtesy, to imitate your delicacy, your tact (this is the way I am instinctively) – within your bounds I shall not develop a single thought that’s foreign to you, it’s of you that I shall meditate:
“Temple of caducity, etc.”
“I believe I’m coming to recognize the inherent pleasure of pine woods.”
August 12, 1940
An infinity of partitions and baffles make pine woods into one of nature’s spaces best arranged for humanity’s ease and meditation.
Not a leaf stirs. But to wind and light in equal measure so many fine needles are subjected that a tempering occurs and something close to complete defeat, a dimming of the offending qualities in these elements, and an emanation of potent scents. The light, even the wind itself, are sifted here, are filtered, restrained, made benign and truly inoffensive. While the bases of the trunks remain perfectly immobile, the peaks are swayed . . .
August 12, 1940 – Evening
The pine woods are also a sort of shed, built like a shed, an arcade, or a market pavilion.
Senile masts coiffed with conical verdant toupees. Apropos of toupees, firs are dark green spinning tops (but that’s another story).
Market pavilion of aromatic needles, of vegetal hairpins, auditorium of myriad insects, temple of caducity (caducity of branches and bristles) whose upper tiers – auditorium – a solarium of myriad insects – are supported by a forest of completely crinkled senile masts, lichen-cloaked like elderly Creoles . . .
Slow production of wood, of masts, of posts, of perches, beams.
Leafless forest, aromatic as the comb of a redhead.
Am I living, an insect, in the brush or fragrant comb of a giantess . . . ?
. . . A forest whose topknots shed.
If leaves are like feathers, pine needles are more like bristles.
Bristles hard as teeth of a comb.
Bristles of a brush but hard as teeth of a comb.
Am I living amidst the brushery (brush, comb and hair) of an aromatic redheaded giantess . . . And music, vibrant to the rafters, of myriad insects, millions of animal sparkles (effervescence) . . . ?
. . . While one of her delicate kerchiefs hovers in the blue sky above.
August 13, 1940 – Morning
Let’s try to sum up. We have:
Ease
a) for strolling:
no low branches
no tall plants
no vines
Deep carpet. A few stray rocks as furnishing.
b) and for meditation:
tempering of light,
of wind.
Discreet fragrance.
Noises, discreet music.
Healthy atmosphere.
Life in the wings.
Soft musical accompaniment, muted.
Leisurely roaming, among so many columns, with almost resilient footfall, on these thick carpets made of green-growing hairpins. Leisurely labyrinth.
How one can stroll about amid these columns, the trees so well stripped of their deciduous branches!
August 13, 1940 – After noon
In many locations around the world, there are structures forming, growing and filling out incessantly along these same lines, greater or lesser in size, whose general pattern I’ll attempt to describe:
They include a ground level with very high ceilings (though this last term is inappropriate), and above that an infinity of upper floors, or rather an extremely complicated framework which consists of upper floors, ceiling and roofing.
No more walls than roof, strictly speaking: rather, they incline towards an open pavilion or arcade.
An infinity of columns support this absence of roofing.
August 17, 1940
Once again I’ve been reading the names of Apollinaire, Léon-Paul Fargue . . . and I’m ashamed of the academic nature of my vision: lack of rapture, lack of originality. Bringing nothing to the light of day except what I alone have to say. – As for the pine woods, I’ve just reread my notes. Little deserves to be saved. – What matters to me is the serious application with which I approach the object, and on the other hand the extreme precision of expression. But I must rid myself of a tendency to say things that are flat and conventional. It’s really not worthwhile writing if it comes down to that.
Pine woods, take your leave of death, of dis-regard, of the non-concious!
coiffed in upper floors and roof of a million crisscrossed green pins.
And on the ground a deep resilient layer of hairpins sometimes raised by the morbid and cautious curiosity of mushrooms.
Production of dead wood. (I’m entering this vast factory of dead wood.) What’s pleasant within it is the perfect dryness. Assuring vibrations and musicality. Something metallic. The presence of insects. Fragrance.
Rise up, pine woods, rise up in speech. We don’t know you. – Show us what you are made of. It’s not for nothing that you have been noticed by F. Ponge . . .
August 18, 1940
In the month of August of 1940, I made my way into familiarity with the pine woods. During that period, these particular kinds of sheds, arcades, natural pavilions have had their chance to leave the mute world, the realm of death and dis-regard, and come into the world of speech, of its use toward man’s moral ends, ultimately in the Logos or, if you prefer and by way of analogy, into the Kingdom of God.
August 20, 1940
Here, where a relatively orderly profusion of senile masts stand tall, coiffed with verdant cones, here, where the sun and the wind are sifted through an infinite crisscrossing of green needles, where the ground is covered by a thick carpet of green hairpins: here wood is slowly produced. Industrially mass-produced, but with unhurried majesty, here wood is manufactured. Perfected in silence and with unhurried majesty and caution. With a certain assurance and success as well. There are by-products: obscurity, meditation, fragrance, etc., kindling of lesser quality, pine cones (compacted fruits like pineapples), needles of vegetal hair, moss, heather, huckleberries, mushrooms. But, through all sorts of outgrowths, decaying one after another (and no matter), the prevailing idea is pursued and envisaged in the staff, the mast: – the beam, the plank.
The pine (I wouldn’t be off the mark in saying this) is the elemental idea of a tree. It is an I, a stalk, and the rest matters little. That is why – from its obligatory outgrowth along the horizontal – it provides so much dead wood. The thing is that only the stalk counts, completely straight, lean, naive and not deviating from that naive impulse, and with no regrets nor corrections nor second thoughts. (In an impulse without second thoughts, completely simple and straight.)
Completely evolved as well toward perfect dryness . . .
Have I entered the brushery (brushes, combs with handles finely tooled in lichen, hairpins) of a gigantic redheaded Creole, amidst these entanglements, these heavy scents? These great rocks here and there, left on top of the salon counter? Yes, most certainly, I find myself here, and as it turns out the place lacks neither charm nor sensuality. This is a great idea that a minor poet would be pleased to ponder.
But why pile on so many dead branches, why this massive stripping of the trunks, and why this consequent ease of strolling among them, with no vines, or cords, or smooth floorboards, but the deep carpet, the meditative obscurity, the silence? Because isn’t the pine the tree that furnishes the most dead wood, that becomes most totally disinterested in its earlier lateral outgrowth, etc.? By this route I come upon an idea perhaps initially less seductive (less shimmering, less cosmetic), but more serious and closer to the reality of my object . . . , etc.
August 21, 1940
Let’s put it simply: on entering a pine woods in the sweltering heat of summer, the pleasure one feels is much like what might be produced by the small hairdressing salon adjoining the bathroom of a wild but noble creature. Aromatic brushery in an overheated atmosphere, the vapors rising from the lacustrian or marine bath. Fragments of sky like shards of mirrors seen through brushes with long handles finely tooled in lichen. A scent sui generis of hair, of its combs and its hairpins. Natural perspiration and hygienic scents mingled. Heavy ornamental stones left here and there on the hairdressing counter, and in the high rafters an animal effervescence, the millions of animal sparkles, the musical, singing vibration.
At once, both brushes and combs. Brushes whose every bristle has the shape and brilliance of the tooth of a comb.
Why has she chosen brushes with green bristles and violet wood handles all tooled with verdigris lichen? Perhaps because this noble savage is a redhead, soon to steep in the neighboring bath, lacustrian or marine. This is the hairdressing shop of Venus, with Phoebus light bulbs inserted in the mirror wall.
I find that a not-unappealing tableau, because it truly renders the pleasure felt by any man who ventures into pine woods in August. A minor poet, indeed even an epic poet, might be content with that. But we are something other than a poet and have something else to say.
If we’ve made our way into the familiarity of these private chambers of nature, and if they were thereby brought to new life in speech, it is not only so we may grasp this sensual pleasure anthropomorphically, but also that a more serious co-nascence may come of it.
So let’s delve into this more thoroughly.
FORMATION OF A POETIC ABSCESS
August 22, 1940
Winter: Temple of caducity.
Eroded by lichen, the low branches have fallen. And no encumbrance midway up. No snaking of vines or ropes. You can roam about at leisure between the senile masts (all crinkled and lichen-cloaked like old Creole men), their locks entangled in the heights.
In August: All set about by mirrors, it’s a pavilion of aromatic hairpins, sometimes raised by the morbid but cautious curiosity of mushrooms; a brushery with long-tooled handles of crimson wood and green bristles, chosen by the wild and noble redhead rising from the lacustrian or marine bath that steams by the low-lying shoulder.
Variation
Temple of caducity! Winter, eroded by lichen, the lower branches have fallen. And no encumbrance midway up, no snaking vines or ropes. You can roam about at leisure among the senile masts whose mops of hair tangle only in the skies.
In August, all set about by mirrors, it’s a pavilion of aromatic hairpins (sometimes raised after light rainfall by the morbid, cautious curiosity of mushrooms), a brushery with long-tooled handles and green bristles, for the flamboyant creature rising from the marine or lacustrian bath that steams by the low-lying shoulder.
August 24, 1940
Simple and accurate expressions to be retained from the pine woods:
Slow production of wood.
Isn’t a pine the tree that furnishes the most dead wood?
On the ground a deep resilient layer of aromatic hairpins whose dry surface is sometimes raised after light rainfall through the morbid curiosity of mushrooms.
. . . And not a leaf stirs between these senile masts whose conical tufts mingle in the skies.
Words to look up in the Littré:
(I’ve reached that point2)
Caduc. Decrepit: frail, on the verge of collapse.
Caducité. Caducity: lack of persistence in one part.
Fournaise. Furnace: 1. large fire; 2. blazing fire; 3. by exaggeration, a very hot place.
Cosmétique. Cosmetic: same origin as cosmos: world, order, ornament.
Encombre. Hindrance: accident that impedes, but comes from incombrum: a mass of felled wood (what a marvelous confirmation).
Serpentement. Snaking: checked.
Lichen: vegetal agamae whose life is arrested by dryness.
Halle, halliers. Pavilion, thicket: checked.
Elastique. Resilient: which returns to its original shape.
Champignon: mushroom which grows in pastoral sites.
Brosserie. Brush factory. No. Brossailles. Broussailles. Brushwood.
Négligentes. Negligent, remiss: from nec legere, not for taking, not for picking. A poor fit.
Above all, it is a slow production of wood.
Through all the successive lateral outgrowth – progressively lichen-cloaked and decaying but no matter (through exaggerated layers of lichen) – the shaft must become more noticeable, persisting for the sole benefit of the more and more heaven-bent conical toupees which time and again hold to the skies seven candelabra.
Overheated shed
Cosmetic lair in summer
Pavilion of aromatic hairpins, where amidst all its brushery with green bristles and long-tooled handles, the wild and noble savage redhead soon dries on rising from the marine or lacustrian bath that steams away by the low-lying shoulder.
Pavilion overheated in summer, all set about by mirrors – where, on deep resilient ground of aromatic hairpins, amid all its brushery with long handles of tooled crimson wood, green-bristled – comes the wild and noble redhead soon to dry on rising from the marine or lacustrian bath that steams away by the low-lying shoulder.
August 25 – 26, 1940
Pavilion overheated in summer. Elementary stalls all set about by mirrors. In the overheated shade of a dense green-bristled brushery, with its long handles of tooled crimson wood, soon dry on the deep resilient ground of aromatic hairpins each figure rising from the marine or lacustrian bath that steams away by the low-lying shoulder.
The Pine Woods
Alpine brushery set about by mirrors
Their crimson wood handles high-tufted in green bristles
In your warm shadow splashed with sunlight
Came Venus to comb her hair on rising from her bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder
Whence the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops
Variation
The alpine brushery – set about by mirrors –
With crimson wood handles high-tufted in green bristles . . .
On the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,
In the warm shadow splashed with sunlight,
Soon to dry the nude rising from the bath
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder
Beneath taut-strung ribbons of sleepless weave
Another
The high brushery set about by mirrors
With crimson wood handles with tufts of green bristle.
In her peignoir, shadow splashed with sunlight,
Soon to dry, Venus on rising from her bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder.
On the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent heads . . .
Floats the oblique sash of sleepless weave.
An Aspect of Pine Woods
The alpine brushery high-tufted in green bristle
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors . . .
In its hot shadow splashed with sunlight
Came Venus to comb her hair on rising from her bath.
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder,
Whence the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops.
Variation
The high brushery, set about by mirrors
With crimson wood handles high-tufted in green bristles . . .
In these peignoirs made of shade splashed with sunlight,
Dry, you vaporous bodies come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder,
On the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops
August 28, 1940
The high brushery set about by mirrors
With crimson wood handles high-tufted in green-bristles . . .
In a peignoir made of shadow splashed with sunlight
Came Venus to comb her hair on rising from her bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder . . .
Whence the depth on resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops
Variation
The high brushery high-tufted in green bristles
With tooled handles set about by mirrors . . .
Did Venus comb her hair there, come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder?
Remains, on the resilient ocher depth
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,
A peignoir of shadow splashed with sunlight
Obliquely woven of sleepless atoms.
Another
The age-old brushery, high-tufted in green bristles,
With tooled handles set about by mirrors . . .
In a peignoir made of shadows splashed with sunlight,
Venus slips away, come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder.
Nothing remains on the resilient ocher carpet
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,
But ribbons woven of sleepless atoms.
Another
The whole of a brushery high-tufted in green bristle
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors
Spirits away a figure come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder
Leaving nothing on the resilient ocher carpet
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops
But a peignoir of shadow splashed with sunlight
Obliquely woven of sleepless atoms.
Another
The alpine brushery high-tufted in green bristles
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors:
Did Venus comb her hair there, come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder?
– There remains a peignoir of shade splashed with sunlight
On the resilient depth of ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,
And ribbons woven of sleepless atoms.
Another
The alpine brushery high-tufted in green bristles
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors.
Of the glistening body risen from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder,
On the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,
Remains a peignoir of shade splashed with sunlight
Obliquely woven of sleepless atoms.
Another
In this brushery high-tufted in green bristles
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors,
Of you, radiant body come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder,
There remains on the resilient ocher carpet
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,
But a peignoir of shadow splashed with sunlight
Obliquely woven of sleepless atoms.
August 31, 1940
Sunlight in the Pine Woods
The alpine brushery with tufts of green bristles,
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors . . .
Should Phoebus appear there, come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder
Nothing would remain – on the resilient ocher carpet
Of the aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops –
But a peignoir of shadow splashed by sunlight
(Var.)
But shadow enlivened by atoms of sunlight
Contantly crisscrossed by sleepless flies.
Variation
Through this brushery with tufts of green bristles,
With tooled handles set about by mirrors,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder
On the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops.
Nothing remains but shadow splashed with sunlight
And ribbons woven of sleepless atoms
Of Sunlight in the Pine Woods
In this brushery high-tufted in green bristles
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors
Which a radiant body enters come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder,
No weave of sleepless flies remains
On the deep resilient of ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops
But a peignoir of shadow splashed with sunlight.
Plaintive flies or Sunlight in the Pine Woods
Within this brushery high-tufted in green bristles
With crimson wood handles set about by mirrors
Should a radiant body enter come from the bath,
Marine or lacustrian, that steams by the low-lying shoulder
Nothing would remain to tell of sleepless flies
On the deep resilient ocher ground
Of aromatic hairpins
Loosed above by masses of indolent treetops
But a peignoir of shadow splashed with sunlight.
Francis Ponge,
La Suchère, August 1940
Variation
Line 3: Of the glistening body just come from the bath
Line 5: Nothing remains . . .
September 2, 1940
NOTA BENE
If this variation is adopted, and allowing that the distichs WW and OM and the triplet OOL are invariable, their order and that of the lines N and B become freely interchangeable, though B must in any case always be placed after N.
These are the invariable elements:
Starting with this, one can lay out the elements
ad libitum as follows:
1 2 3 4 5 | 1 4 2 3 5 | |
1 2 4 3 5 | 1 4 3 2 5 |
1 2 3 5 4 | 1 4 3 5 2 |
1 3 2 4 5 |
1 3 5 4 2 | 2 3 4 5 1 |
1 3 4 2 5 | 2 4 3 5 1 |
1 3 2 5 4 |
1 3 5 2 4 | 2 3 1 4 5 |
1 3 4 5 2 | etc. |
However the sequence 4 – 2 is inadvisable (of aromatic hairpins of the glistening body . . . )
NONE OF THIS SHOULD BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY
None of this should be taken seriously.
What have I achieved in the course of these sixteen pages (pp. 91 to 106) and these ten days? – Not a whole lot for the pains I’ve taken.
Only this:
1. that the pine woods seem to be set about by mirrors, by hand mirrors (but this is already noted on pages 89 – 90);
2. the expression high-tufted, which is just right;
3. that the hairpins are “loosed above by masses of indolent treetops,” which is quite pretty, gives a rather good picture of the lazy swaying of the pine summits. But I’ll have to look up négligent, indolent, in the Littré . . .
4. the image of the dressing gown, the word peignoir itself is right in speaking of Venus, since it is what’s put on before combing one’s hair, se peigner;
5. entaché, splashed, which gives the right impression of shade splashed with sunlight, because it includes a pejorative sense, an indication of imperfection in the subject, which is valuable;
6. AND ABOVE ALL, the idea, the awareness of this reality: of the sunlight seen through the pine woods nothing remains but shadow, some taut-strung oblique ribbons, and sleepless flies.
If I’ve achieved no more than this in ten days of uninterrupted and relentless effort (I can certainly claim that much), then I’ve wasted my time. I’d even be tempted to say, the time of the pine woods. For after an eternity of nonexpression in the mute world, it is eager to be expressed now that I have given it this hope, or a foretaste.
Why this disorder, this derailment, this distraction? Once again – after managing to come up with the little prose poem on pages 91 – 95 – I recalled Paulhan’s statement: “From now on, the prose poem is no longer for you . . .” and I wanted to make this prose poem into one done in verse. While instead I should have taken apart the prose poem to integrate its interesting elements into my objective relations (sic) with the pine woods.
Paulhan was certainly right. But my intention here is not to make a poem, rather to move ahead in the understanding and expression of the pine woods, to gain something for myself there – instead of beating my brains out and wasting my time over it as I’ve done.
NOTE
In passing I must note a problem to think through again when I have the leisure: that of the difference between knowledge and expression (relationship and difference). It’s a vast problem, as I’ve just realized. In brief, this is what I mean to say: the difference between the expression of the concrete, the visible, and the knowledge or expression of the idea, of the essential differentiating and comparative quality of the subject. To put it more cogently: in some poems (all of them botched): the frog, the dancer, particularly the bird, the wasp nest, and this last (the sunlight in the pine woods), I practice expressionism (?), I mean that after rediscovering them, I employ the most precise words to describe the subject. But my intention is something other than that: it’s the basic understanding of the pine woods, by that I mean the isolation of the inherent distinguishing qualities of these woods, and what I have called its lesson. To me these seem to be two quite different things, though ordinarily at the far limits of perfection for each one, they must come together again...
So let’s return as quickly as possible to the search for everything that can be said about pine woods and only of them.
Here again there are distinctions:
Primo, it is clear that the woods or the forest each have a particular quality and that I often tend to stray on this point.
But this time I won’t go seriously astray for the pine woods clearly possess all the qualities of the woods and forests in general, plus individual features as pine woods. Just realizing that is enough to keep me from straying too far.
(In fact, if I do stray off in my pine woods, that will be only half bad, it will even be a good thing, for the woods are clearly propitious places for erring, or for error, there’s some labyrinth in all woods.)
Secundo, there are qualities inherent to the pine, and qualities particular to the pine as a part of pine woods. The pine differs according to whether it lives in isolation or in society. It differs also according to whether it is situated in the interior or at the fringe of the woods of which it is a part. And I rather like those pines at the edge, held to certain sacrifices in their parts turned toward the woods, but free to develop as they please to the side facing the fields, the void, the un-wooded world.
The function of bordering their society falls to them, to conceal the arcana, to conceal the interior nakedness (the austerity, the sacrifice, the lack) through the spread of their lower parts: they must be less exigent about
They are permitted to maintain the memory and display of their earlier outgrowths. They even live through these outer tips as much as through their peaks (oh how badly I’m saying this).
September 3, 1940
If the individuals on the fringes (orée, fringes or lisière, forest edge: words to verify in the Littré) do a pretty fair job of hiding the interior from the eyes of the exterior, they fail quite badly at hiding the exterior from the eyes of the interior. They behave like a glass partition, or rather (since they aren’t translucent) like a partition of cloth, of stone, or of carved wood.
When the wood is vast or dense enough, from its core the sky cannot be seen laterally, one must move towards the fringe, to the point where the partition no longer appears impervious. Now there’s something that would be sublime if put to use in a cathedral: a forest of columns such that one would progressively reach total obscurity (the crypt).
And yet this is truly more or less what is realized in the woods, for though ultimately there is no wall, the monument breathes through all its pores in the very midst of nature, better than a lung, as though with gills.
It could even be said that this should be a criterion of achievement, the mark of this genre of architecture: the point where total obscurity would be realized, taking into account for example that between each column there must be allowance for a space of x width, to accommodate easy strolling, etc.
Generally speaking, what is a forest? Both a monument and a society. (As a tree is both a being and a statue.) A living monument and an architectural society. But are trees social beings? Note that some trees are more predisposed than others to live in society. By the weight of their seeds, therefore minimally transportable by the wind and destined to fall at the foot of the father or not far off. Such as notably the pine cone, the acorn, all the trees with heavy fruit: apple, orange, pear, lemon, apricot, almond, date, and olive trees.
Others are disposed through the enormous quantities of flowers, hence of seeds, so that inevitably a certain number stay at the foot: I’m thinking of acacias.
The trees with small berries tend less toward this because clearly it is birds that are charged with their dissemination: cherry, service berry, etc.
Others are visibly predisposed to a more or less solitary life by the indubitably Aeolian nature of their seeds: notably the maples (coupled).
So, as far as our pine is concerned, it is probably a social tree by nature. How far is the seed propelled at the moment when the pine cone opens (does it burst abruptly like the pods of its cousin the broom)? Has anyone even measured this distance? How does this affect the pine as a social tree? Would we speak about its rights and obligations? Why not? Obligations: that of limiting its freedom of outgrowth to that of its neighbors; it is in fact forced by them to do just that, and the force of an individual doesn’t seem to count for much here, though its age evidently does so to a great extent: there is a priority conferred by age, etc.
September 4, 1940
With the pine, there is an abolition of their successive expansions (particularly with the woods pine), which fortunately corrects, annuls, the customary curse of vegetation: having to live eternally with the weight of each action taken from childhood on. For this tree more than others, it is permissible for it to separate itself from earlier expansions. It has permission to forget. It’s true that the subsequent developments bear strong resemblance to the former cast-offs. But that doesn’t make a particle of difference. The joy lies in clearing out and beginning again. And besides, this keeps happening at a higher level. It seems that something has been gained.
September 9, 1940
torted themselves to a fare-thee-well out of despair or boredom (or ecstasy), which would have supported the whole weight of their actions, which would finally have constituted some very beautiful statues of sorrowful heroes. But their combined mass delivered them from the vegetal malediction. They have an ability to do away with their first expressions, permission to forget.
(The subjection of the parts to the whole. Yes, but when each part is a being, an individual: tree, animal [man], or word, or sentence or chapter – then it turns dramatic!)
The mass also protects them from the wind, the cold.
Alone, it would have been all or nothing, or perhaps one after the other in succession: perfect development up to a point – or atrophy of growth due to contrary elements.
In society outgrowth is normalized, in addition to which it creates something else: wood.
Some might have thought that the optimal solution would be to raise the young pines in nurseries, then – actually without sacrificing a single one – transplanting them from one place to another so that each could have a full chance to expand.
Meantime they’d have to have been kept together long enough to have acquired strong, straight trunks.
But at that point there arises a question of paramount importance.
Whereas up in the air, pine branches respect one another mutually, keep their distance, not intermingling viciously (now this is actually something rather strange, rather remarkable), do the same rules apply underground, for their roots? Would it be possible to disentangle a forest at its base without dangerously amputating each individual? Who knows? Who’d like to give me an answer? This will be necessary for my further research . . .
Words Looked Up After the Fact in the Littré:
Branches: arms (Celtic).
Mère branche. Mother branch: terminal branch.
One mustn’t grow attached to the branches (to what is not essential).
Branche gourmande. Glutton branch: the one that takes up too much space.
Branches de charpente. Main branches: the main shoots of a tree or bush, which support the smaller and fruiting branches.
Proverb: “Better to cling to the trunk of the tree than to its branches.”
Branchu. Branched: of many branches. A branched idea is one that offers two possibilities, two ramifications. “Do you believe that this idea, double-branched and equally awful in both directions . . .” (Saint-Simon)
Halle. Pavilion: 1. a large public place, generally covered; 2. a building open on all sides. Etymology: Halla, temple (German). There seems to have been confusion in Old French between halle and the Latin aula (courtyard).
Hallier. Thicket: copse, a very dense clump of shrubs (Buffon says: an area formerly cleared which are covered only with low scrub). Low Latin: hasla: branch.
Hangar. Shed: garage open on various sides and intended for storage of tools. From angaros: messenger (angel, Persian). Places where messengers (or angels!) would pause.
Fournilles. Brushwood: small branches and twigs left from cutting underbrush or saplings and useful for warming ovens (fours).
Gaulis: branches from underbrush left to grow. Branches that stop hunters running through heavy thickets.
Touffe. Tuft. Touffu. Tufted: checked.
Cimes. Treetops: from cuma, tender shoot, from χδω: to be swollen by what is engendered (sprout).
Peignoir: yes, robe put on to comb one’s hair (se peigner).
Taché. Stained: checked.
Entaché. Splashed: can be taken in a favorable sense, given that taché can be used as a mark of good qualities.
Pénombre. Shadow; astronomical term.
Bois. Wood: 1. that which lies under the bark of a tree; 2. a cluster of trees.
Forêt. Forest: from foresta, territory forbidden (foreign) to agriculture.
Futaie: forest of full-grown trees (see below). Futaie is opposed to taillis, brushwood. A term used in Old French: clères futaies.
Taillis: checked.
Pin. Pine, nothing special. La pigne, pine-nut, or pistache, pistachio. Pignon. Pine seed.
Conifère. Conifer: yes, checked: which bears fruit in the form of cones.
Lisière. Selvage: edge of field or forest; from liste, border.
Orée. Fringe: skirt of woods (becoming obsolete).
Expansion: from expandere: a spreading out, outpouring, deployment.
Vitrage. Glasswork: checked.
Vitrail. Stained glass, leaded glass window: checked.
Rideaux. Curtains: checked.
Chicane. Chicanery: checked.
Branchie. Gills: no, doesn’t have the same etymology as branches.
Rectifier. To rectify: checked.
Conidie. Conidium: fungus, dust covering lichen, from χονις.
Préau. Yard: completely incorrect, comes from pré, meadow. Would be right for the clearing and not for the woods.
Thalle. Thallus: checked.
Orseille. Dyer’s moss: variety of lichen, from the name of the classifier.
A wood of 40 years is known as
futaie sur taillis
| timber over underbrush |
“ | 40-60 years | ” | demi-futaie |
half-timber |
“ | 60-120 years | ” | jeune haute futaie |
young high timber |
“ | 120-200 years | ” | haute futaie |
high timber |
“ | 200 years | ” | haute futaie sur le retour |
high timber past its prime. |
And so, this little opuscule is only (barely) “timber over underbrush.”
END OF THE PINE WOODS FROM THIS POINT ON WE’RE OUT IN THE OPEN COUNTRY
APPENDIX TO “THE PINE WOODS NOTEBOOK”
I. ADDENDA
The preceding text was written, beginning on August 7, 1940, in a wood near La Suchère, a hamlet in the Haute-Loire where the author, after a month and a half of exodus along the roads of France, had just been reunited with his family. The author remained in La Suchère for almost two months, but in this same pocket notebook which constituted his only stock of paper at the time, nothing was written but the above text and the few notes that follow, entered as addenda on the dates indicated.
August 6, 1940
“What I might like to read”: that could be the title, the definition, of what I’ll write.
Deprived of all reading material for several weeks and months, I’m beginning to feel like reading.
Well then! It’s what I’d like to read that I’ll have to write (in fact, enough of this . . .).
But on probing my inner self a bit more attentively, I find it’s not only reading that I’m wanting, but also painting and music (though less). So I must write in a way that will satisfy this amalgam of needs.
I’ll have to keep this image constantly in mind: my book, alone (perforce), on a table: that I’d like to open it and read (a few pages only) – and get back to it the following day.
August 20, 1940
What a lot of things I’d have to write about if I were a simple writer . . . and perhaps I should.
The account of that long month of adventures, from the day I left Rouen till the end of the exodus and my arrival at Le Chambon; today (for instance), relating my conversation with Jacques Babut; of my daily walks and meditations, or of other conversations similar or different; the depiction of people around me, who cross my path and to whom for whatever reason I have lent an ear; my reflections on the political situation in France and the world at such an important moment in history; on our own situation, our uncertainty about the morrow . . .
But some failing prevents me from doing that, not solely laziness or fear of its difficulty: it seems to me I couldn’t interest myself exclusively, much as I should, and successively, in anyone of those subjects. It seems to me that upon undertaking anyone of them, I’d instantly sense that it wasn’t essential, that it would be a waste of my time.
And it’s to “the pine woods” that I instinctively return, to the subject that totally preoccupies me, that monopolizes my personality, that brings my whole being into play. This is one of the few subjects in which I’ll invest (or lose) myself entirely: a bit like a scholar in his chosen research.
It’s not a relating, an account, or a description, but a conquest.
Later, the same day
Something important (to remember) in my conversation today with Jacques Babut, the pastor.
We had already gone beyond the point where our doctrines part: mine trusting in man, his forever refusing him any trust. We were talking of what he calls the Kingdom of God, and to which I give another name. And he was telling me that according to the Scriptures, Redemption would not be achieved for any man until this Kingdom had come about (that squares fairly well with my own theory) . . . “Moreover,” he said to me, “this Kingdom must come universally, not only for men, but for things as well . . .” and he cited, I think, Saint Paul.
“Yes, things in the spirit of men,” I replied parenthetically.
And later, describing the new man of my own dreams, I told him that most likely this man would have the ability to ponder the essential problems much more freely – that of the ambient mystery, of speech as well, which particularly interests me (I added).
A new stage in my “thinking” dates from those moments of our conversation.
I begin to perceive with some degree of clarity how the two primary elements of my personality (?) come together in me: the poetic and the political.
Certainly the redemption of things (in the spirit of man) will be fully possible only when the redemption of man is a fait accompli. And now it is understandable to me why I work at preparing each of them at the same time.
. . . The birth in the human world of the simplest things, their accession by the spirit of man, the acquisition of corresponding qualities – a new world in which men and things together will enjoy harmonious relations: that is my poetic and political goal. “This might strike you as still somewhat hazy . . .” (I’ll have to get back to it.)
II. CORRESPONDENCE
The manuscript of
The Pine Woods Notebook, abandoned on September 9, 1940, was entrusted by the author around the beginning of the following year to one of his friends, M.P.,
3 then residing in Marseille, who wished to type it. One copy was soon sent to another friend, G.A., who, in touch with literary circles in the “free” zone, had inquired about the author’s recent production. When G.A. had read the text, the following correspondence ensued.
FROM G.A. TO THE AUTHOR
Marseille, March 7, 1941
. . . My articles in Le Figaro have provoked a group of young poets, who are now looking askew at me . . . But I’m not done yet: I gave Le Jour an article on the “poet’s craft” which will have the fanatics gnashing their teeth. I’ll send it on to you . . . And I’ve prepared another on inspiration stripped bare.
All of this (including the stripping) naturally brings me to your pine woods. Useless – no, useful – to tell you that I find this deeply intriguing . . . Yet I cannot help deploring that your “heroism” in facing the problem of expression nonetheless wound up leading you into a sort of impasse. For the outcome of your efforts runs too great a risk of becoming a quasi-scientific perfection which, for having undergone purification, tends towards a compendium of interchangeable materials. Each thing in itself, rigorously specific and followed through, is excellent. The whole becomes a patchwork. You see what I mean, even if badly stated.
The chimera lies in wishing to reinstate the object in its entirety. You’ll never manage to give more than an idea, a moment, of an object. (Not even, perhaps, if you should choose, instead of a pine woods – palpitating, evolving – an object as stable in appearance as the pebble, which is still nonetheless an infinitely changing organism.)
Have you repeated the “experience” of the pine woods in winter, in spring? Have you reflected that yours are pines of the area where you were living? The rigid pine with long vertical trunk (like the one they call pariccio in the forests of the Corsican mountains, from which they make masts for boats), but which has nothing in common with the wood of maritime pines from my coastline – twisted, tormented – nor with the majestic parasol pines in their chosen solitude – nor even the slender pines, pencil-drawn, from the inland regions of Provence or Attica?
Instead of “momentarying” the eternity of the thing-in-itself (could God himself do as much, O proud Francis, with that sublime outburst on what the pines owe you for having noticed them?), I believe that the artist cannot aspire for better than to eternalize the shared moment of the object and himself.
Humility? Most likely. But not without grandeur, and which already overlays a rather strong ambition.
All of this on the basis of your research. But the exposé, the revelation of the method, intrigues me still more . . .
. . . Here we’re in agreement! Do you remember the chapbook Poèmes en commun that I published a while back with C.S.? That was already an essay of this sort (mutatis mutandi). In it I alluded to a work I’ve never published, which I still have in my possession, unpublished: Genèse d’un poème (Genesis of a Poem).
What you did, before and during, step by step, word by word, for the Pine Woods, (somewhat like the Journal des faux monnayeurs (Journal of the Counterfeiters) for the novel), I did afterwards, retrospectively, for the Ballade du Dee-Why (which is in Antaeus) – like Dante’s commentary for the sonnets of the Vita Nova, or Poe’s for The Raven, etc.
I believe there are two related approaches here; each in its own way casts surprising light on the paths of creative imagination. If one could pick some journal to gather them in a sort of special issue, which might be called Birth of the Poem, for instance, with an introduction, a “head” (and right to the point, O mysterious correlation, my article on inspiration stripped bare aims at promoting studies of this sort), I believe this could be extremely interesting.
What do you think?
G.A.
FROM THE AUTHOR TO M.P.
Roanne, March 16, 1941
. . . My mind must be addled by springtime: the proposal I received from G.A. concerning The Pine Woods seems to have driven me half-mad. I’m sending you his letter. I really hadn’t expected such a use of this poor text. There are moments when I feel totally irritated (defensively) at the idea of being explained; others when that slacks off, and I feel discouraged, quite capable of letting it all go...
No! G.A. has (apparently) failed to understand that in this neck of the woods, it is much less a matter of the birth of a poem than an attempted assassination (far from successful) of a poem by its object.
Can I lend myself to such misinterpretation? Honestly, I don’t believe so.
Note that aside from that, I agree about the patchwork (though perhaps, since it has to do with a bath, I might have preferred mosaic).
In case you haven’t read it, find enclosed G.A.’s article in last Thursday’s Le Jour.
F.P.
P.S. (Two hours later) – Enclosed, projected reply. If you approve, drop it in the mailbox. Thanks. Without forgetting to enclose with it the Mémorial article for Louis le Cardonnel and Pierre de Nolhac.
FROM THE AUTHOR TO G.A.
Roanne, March 16, 1941
I read your article in Le Jour (so named in antithesis). I follow you up to the moment when it turns (somewhat vaguely in my opinion) positive.
Primo: Personally, whatever you may think and whatever most people think of it, I don’t believe I am answerable to your criticism, for I don’t consider myself a poet.
Secundo: In any case I maintain that every writer “worthy of the name” must write against everything that has been written before him (must in the sense of is forced to, is obliged to) – particularly against every existing rule. Actually, this is the way it has always been; I’m speaking of people with character.
It goes without saying, as you have clearly grasped, I am fiercely steeped in technique. But I am partial to one technique per poet, and even, ultimately, one technique per poem – as dictated by its object.
Thus, for The Pine Woods, if I may put it this way, isn’t the pine the tree that (during its lifetime) provides the most dead wood? . . .
The height of preciosity? – Most likely. But what else can I do? Once you’ve imagined this kind of difficulty, honor forbids evading it . . . (and anyway, it’s rather entertaining).
One thing more, about your series of articles (but I can’t attach too much importance to this): it seems to me that to propose right now what I’d call “measures of order” in poetry would play into the hands of those who proclaim that primo: “Up to the present there has been disorder,” and secundo: “We are the ones who impose order,” which exemplifies the fundamental hypocrisy of this period . . . No, don’t you see, in art (at least) there is, there must be, permanent revolution and terror; while in criticism, this is the moment to keep quiet, for want of the power to denounce the false values they claim to impose on us. On that score, and to show you the danger, I attach an article which appeared in the Mémorial de Saint-Étienne on the same day as yours in Le Jour.
This said, do for The Pine Woods exactly what seems best to you. Now you realize that in my mind it has nothing at all to do with the birth of a poem but rather an effort against “poetry.” And not, it goes without saying, in favor of the pine woods (I’m not altogether mad) but in favor of the mind and spirit, which could gain some lesson there, grasp some moral and logical secret (according to the universal “characteristic,” if you will).
F.P.
The Pine Woods remained unpublished. But here is another passage from a second letter addressed by the author to G.A. concerning the “poet’s craft”:
Roanne, July 22, 1941
. . . So then what do you mean by “poet’s craft”? As for me, I’m more and more convinced that my doings are more scientific than poetic. It is a matter of attaining clear formulas, on the order of: One gnawed mesh won the day. Patience and passage of time, etc.
I need some poetic magma, but only to rid myself of it.
I fiercely (and patiently) want to cleanse the mind and spirit of it. It is in that sense that I claim to be a combatant in the ranks of the enlightened, as they said in the great century (the 18th). Once again, it is a matter of plucking forbidden fruit, with all due deference to the powers of darkness, to God the unworthy in particular.
Much remains to be said about the obscurantism that threatens us, from Kierkegaard to Bergson and Rosenberg . . .
It’s not for naught that the bourgeoisie in ITS COMBAT of the 20th century extols a return to the Middle Ages.
I haven’t enough religiöses Gemüt to accept this passively. You neither? – Fine . . .
Faithfully yours,
F.P.
END OF APPENDIX
TO
“THE PINE WOODS NOTEBOOK”