OK… so one of my favorite places that I’ve ever been to is a little resort, um, out in Palos Verdes, California. Uh, it’s kind of, like, the middle of nowhere. You have to really drive out there… it takes forever to get there and it’s all side roads, basically, to get out there. Um, but it’s beautiful. It’s got the most beautiful views. Uh, it’s got this really cute little restaurant called Nelson’s… I think… that has this awesome little patio outside to watch the sunset. And then they also have this little par three, nine-hole course, um…
The student provides clear details that explain why she likes this place so much. She takes a little while to build up to her reasons and then runs out of time mid-sentence. But this is okay because she does fully address the question.