YES, I KNOW THAT CHAPTER 23 is not a good chapter. I tried not to write it but it interfered with me and would not let go. Like many good ideas, to write this nonsense by Pisces is fine when you think about it in bed, but when it gets really on the page the idea seems more and more stupid.
After this chapter, I had no choice but to surrender before the evidence and I let the story aside for many months, and perhaps I would not have published if what happened on October 7 had not happened.