35 In the Still of the Night

Mo found a rusted aluminum beach lounger in the old boat shed at the edge of the property and dragged it onto the front porch of the beach house, positioning it in the darkest corner, under the roof overhang. He doused himself with mosquito repellant, stretched out, and waited.

It was his second, and, he’d already decided, last night on sentry duty.

The night was quiet, with the background thrum of cicadas, and the occasional sound of cars passing by on Chatham Avenue, and he was already beginning to regret this fool’s errand.

Mo had been too embarrassed to admit his late-night mission to Leetha or Hattie or Cass, who would have ridiculed the notion that he might catch their arsonist on a return visit. He wasn’t a cop, didn’t have a weapon, except for a prybar he’d borrowed from one of the carpenters, and didn’t think of himself as a vigilante. But the notion of someone deliberately setting fire to the place, and in the process risking someone’s life, had been gnawing on him since the fire trucks departed.

The other thing that gnawed on him was Hattie’s reaction to the fire. He kept seeing the tears streaming down her soot-smudged face as he watched her dreams going up in smoke. She hadn’t really discussed her finances since buying the house, but he felt pretty sure that she’d staked every dime she had on the place, and it enraged him that some malevolent shitbag could take all of that away with the strike of a match.


As the soft, humid night settled over him like a cloak, Mo wrestled with his growing attraction to Hattie. She was nothing like any woman he’d ever known before; funny and fearless, prickly and pugnacious, but with a tender, vulnerable core that she rarely revealed.

He yawned and looked down at his phone. Just past midnight, and he was already feeling drowsy, despite the concentrated caffeine in the Red Bull he’d chugged.

Suddenly, he heard the crunch of tires on the driveway. He slid out of the chair and crawled over to the edge of the porch, where he peeked up over the porch railing, and spied a dark sedan, its headlights dimmed, rolling slowly toward the house.

Mo’s pulse quickened. He had a small flashlight stuffed into his back pocket, and felt for it now.

The car continued past him, toward the rear of the house, and when it was out of sight he grabbed the prybar, opened the front door, and sprinted through the darkened house toward the back porch.

In his haste he banged his knee, hard, on one of the kitchen cabinets, and he whispered a curse. He opened the back door and crept onto the back porch. The sedan was parked a few yards away, under the shade of a live oak tree, its motor running. He heard the car door open and a slender, dark shape slowly emerged from the shadows. The stranger carried some kind of thick club in his right hand.

He inched toward the porch, shoulders hunched over, eyes focused on the uneven ground. Mo was moving now too; tiptoeing forward, he hid behind a huge, overgrown azalea and waited. He heard twigs breaking underfoot and ragged, uneven breaths as the stranger drew closer.

Mo felt sweat trickling down his back. Gnats swarmed around his face, and his heart thumped wildly in his chest. He peeked out from his shelter and saw that the intruder was within reach.

He took a deep breath and leapt out from his hiding place, knocking the stranger to the ground.

Aiiieeeeyyyyyy.”

The high-pitched shriek echoed in the darkness. He grabbed his flashlight from his back pocket and shone it down on the intruder’s face, shocked by what he saw.

It was an elderly woman, her face a mask of wrinkles and rage, with a black knit cap pulled low over her hair and forehead. “Get offa me!” she screamed, ineffectively flailing her arms and legs. “Owwwww, get offa me.”

Mo rolled to one side, but kept his right hand clamped on her left arm. With his left hand he yanked the cap off her head, revealing a cloud of silvery hair. She swung hard, slapping him on the jaw and screamed, “Don’t touch me, you sonofabitch!”

Suddenly, the back porch light snapped on, flooding the backyard in a bright yellow glow. “Who’s out there? What’s going on?” It was Hattie.


The old woman was sitting up now, scowling up at the two of them. She pointed at Mo. “This sonofabitch broke my hip! I will sue the two of you for every penny you’ve got.”

“Mavis? Mavis Creedmore?” Hattie glanced over at Mo. “I don’t understand. What are you doing out here this late?”

“I was waiting for her,” Mo said, pointing at the old lady. “Only I didn’t know it was her. I just figured our arsonist might make a return visit. I’ve been camping out, sleeping in a lawn chair on the front porch, for the past two nights. And sure enough, tonight, she did come back.”

Hattie shook her head. “Come on, let’s get her up and see if she’s hurt.”

“Of course I’m hurt,” Mavis snapped. “This fool tackled me. Knocked me clean off my feet. I could have been killed.”

Hattie and Mo each took an arm and gently hoisted the old woman to her feet.

Owwww,” she moaned, when she was finally standing upright. She rubbed her bony hips and dusted sand from her baggy black knit pants.

“Mavis,” Hattie said. “Why are you here? What are you up to?”

“I was checking on my house,” Mavis Creedmore said, scowling. “No law against that.”

Mo gave a snort of disbelief. “Checking? At one in the morning? In total darkness?” He pointed his flashlight at a wooden baseball bat lying near the spot where he’d tackled her, and picked it up. “With this?”

“I brought that for protection,” she said. “And if I hadn’t been sneak attacked, I by God would have laid it upside your head.”

“This is not your house anymore, and you know it,” Hattie said, her voice stern. “Your family left it to sit here and rot. And you didn’t pay your property taxes, so the city condemned it and I bought it.”

“That’s a damn lie,” Mavis cried. “Creedmores have owned this house for seventy years. My granddaddy left it to me, and I’ll be damned if I let some pissant little girl like you steal it out from under me.” Her lip curled into a sneer as she addressed Hattie.

“Hattie Bowers. You’re a damned thief. You can change your name all you want, but everybody in this town knows who you are and who you come from. You’re as crooked as a dog’s hind leg, just like that thieving daddy of yours.”

Hattie flinched and was silent for a moment, staring down at the old woman’s loosely laced orthopedic shoes.

When she looked up again her voice was low but steady. “Mavis, I know you’re the one who complained to the city about us. Now you need to get back in your car and drive away from here, right this minute, before I change my mind and turn you over to the police.”

“You’re letting her go?” Mo asked, incredulous. “She’s an arsonist. Criminal trespasser and a vandal. She came out here tonight, probably intending to finish the job she started two nights ago.”

“Arsonist?” the old lady sniffed. She poked a bony finger in Mo’s chest. “If I’d a wanted to burn this house down, buddy, you’d best believe there would be nothing left standing out here. I didn’t set no fire, and you can’t prove I did.”

Mavis snatched the bat from his hand and hobbled toward her car. She turned on the high beams, threw the sedan into reverse, backing over a shovel and a plastic bucket, then sped away down the driveway, kicking up a cloud of sand in her wake.

Hattie sighed. “Tug said this house has bad vibes. Cass said it too. I’m beginning to think maybe they were right.”

“Bullshit,” Mo said. He pointed at the sedan’s red taillights. “Do you believe that old crone? Was she lying when she said she didn’t start the fire?”

“I’m not sure what to think,” Hattie admitted.

“Then, who else?” he asked.

Hattie shivered, despite the heat. Deliberately changing the subject, she lightly touched his jaw, which was already darkening with a bruise. “Did she do that to you?”

“Walloped me a good one,” he said, his expression sheepish. “I’m just glad she dropped her bat when I jumped her.”

“Mavis Creedmore didn’t come to play,” Hattie agreed. “Better put some ice on it when you get back to town.”