Perfectionist on the Beach

Eighty-six degrees, high tide.

We were arguing about suicide.

Me, safe from sun under the umbrella;

you, propped on your elbows in the sand,

your arms, recently iron-pumped, bronzing smoothly,

your short gold curls and strong nose almost

Roman coinworthy as you scanned

the water with restless air and announced

you’d kill yourself, you really would,

if you weren’t a coward.

While I maintained the wish to die

itself was cowardly.

And I didn’t believe you:

you didn’t really want to die.

What about speed and wind—

your long bike rides, tracing the harbor

on unknown roads? What about your pencil

setting a line on a clean sheet of drafting

paper? Women with small breasts

and certain customs you were said

to love in bed? At the very least,

the kind of happiness that’s purely physical.

The person who wants to die,

you snapped, doesn’t care about

any of that. He’d give it all up

for a moment’s peace. Peace from

striving, from endless dissatisfaction

with a self that’s less than ideal.

I’d do it, you insisted, if I weren’t

shit-scared of pain.

If it’s pain you don’t like

you’d take pills, I said.

But I hadn’t won, and added lamely,

Aren’t you curious how your life

is going to Turn Out? That’s not

a question of being brave—

only mildly vain, which you are,

or so you claim.

You didn’t answer for a while,

and half-enraged (or was it half in love)

I watched your critic’s eye alight

on a black-haired figure clad in white

bikini as she ran lightly down

the hard-packed sand and dove

into a creamy wave.