Mouth set. So far, nought
not out, having dabbed at
the spinner who’d been giving it
some air. Hands soft – taking the sting
out of each delivery.
Their demon quickie
is brought back into the attack.
He pounds in.
A virtuoso leave.
You judge the away
swinger to perfection.
Shadows nudge further east
across the square. Pigeons clatter
as mid-off jogs back. Thunderous
approach to the wicket. This one
you nick.
The keeper whoops and hurls
the ball to the skies. You walk without waiting,
head-down to a door marked VISITORS.
In among the grim socks, grass-stained whites
and open coffins you take in
the smell of embrocation, shake off
gloves, stoop to unbuckle your pads.
PETER CARPENTER
Just Like That (Smith/Doorstop, 2012)
I met Peter Carpenter in the summer of 2001 at the Arvon Foundation’s Totleigh Barton writing centre. I was at a low ebb of writing at the time. I had published one book of poems, in 1996. In spite of that book’s relative success my publisher had no plans to do a follow-up second collection. I had been sending my second manuscript to publishers for several months, collecting many polite notes of rejection in the process.
I felt as if I was about to drop off the face of the earth.
One week after the Arvon course finished Peter emailed me to ask if I had a manuscript of poems that I might be prepared to send to him at Worple Press. One week later he said that he liked it very much and would like to publish it the following year. Since that moment, and very often since, I have felt that I owe him my life. My utter and profound feeling of despondency was replaced in an instant by one of relief.
I think of Peter as an angel and Worple as home.
So, being honest, I am biased when I read his poems. I come to them knowing his voice and his poetics and the rhythm of his thinking. You could say I am on his side, before I even turn the page. This feeling is doubled when the poem in question is about cricket and is subtitled ‘an elegy’. (We all have our prejudices, consciously or not; W.H. Auden encourages us to admit them frankly.)
Carpenter does silence brilliantly: the silence between people, the silence of crowds at football and at the racing, the silence of defeat:
In among the grim socks, grass-stained whites
and open coffins, you take in
the smell of embrocation, shake off
gloves, stoop to unbuckle your pads.
Like all good poems, ‘Nightwatchman’ is about much more than what it is about. The ‘dreaded finger’, the ‘marked’ door and open coffins (kitbags) of team-mates all point towards death. Carpenter’s chief tactic, however, is not to persuade the reader of this but to present these luminous details – which point towards loss – with control and tact. Poem after poem in Just Like That, from which this poem comes, accomplishes the feat of leaving the reader meditating on the strangeness of what has been described in measured syntax and precisely rendered detail.