THESIS

Her Dark Things by Audra Colfax

Piece #8: See Me

Oil and mixed media on canvas. 12″ x 12″.

[Image of a gnarled jumble of abstracted, paper-white birch trees and oversize, overlapping iron-gray boulders evocative of a bird’s nest. Found objects incorporated throughout by layering.]

Note on a sticky note found tucked under laminate flooring in the laundry room during a renovation of the Dunn residence.

the baby is here it

came early.

—Jan89. CD.

Note on yellow legal paper found folded inside a copy of Slouching Toward Bethlehem by Joan Didion in the den at the Dunn residence.

the baby is MINE is the

baby the baby is Eveline

mine

is my baby Eveline

my DAUGHTER and Brady

is gone he left he’s

done with me with us says I’m too much now

that I’m off the MEDS

he can TELL even though

I lie and tell him I still take them

he REFUSED to be what she needs

a FATHER

I said haven’t I been BETTER since

we learned about her

about Evie

he said yeah he said for a WHILE

but that ended a while ago

when you ABANDONED your plan

your treatment

which feels like he’s blaming M

who he doesn’t even really know

so I hate him for that because

M (M) sees me is the only one who

sees me

—Jan89. CD.

Note on Lisa Frank stationery found in a tea tin in Cindy Dunn’s bedroom closet in the Dunn residence.

I’ve drawn some pictures of

HER

some sketches when she’s been napping I should have been

napping too I KNOW but I can’t it’s like I CAN’T and

when she’s peaceful she is so BEAUTIFUL so I sketch her when I

can the drawings are not very good somehow she is so beautiful but

the drawings

are not it’s like

I can’t

SEE her.

—Feb89. CD.

Note on torn graph paper found in a tea tin in Cindy Dunn’s bedroom closet in the Dunn residence.

I sneak sneak sneak back to King City

Like a ghost, unseen, only felt

because

M wants to draw me he wants to keep drawing me and he tells me

to keep drawing he says he likes me this way in this crackedwideopen

way and he says it’s good it’s better being around him I’m better

it’s beautiful

to keep letting myself be raw and empty and keep NOT taking my

meds and stare blank eyed at walls and at HER and just let him

paint

and paint and paint me and now I bring

Evie and

she has colic

she screams and SCREAMS all day and she

screams and screams all NIGHT and M hates it and he LOVES

it and I think he hates her and I think he loves her

for the way she makes me all broken and broke down and skeletal

and turned inside out and at least

he likes ME

some kinda way at least he still lets ME come to him when I need to

we exhaust ourselves and deplete and RANSACK and ruin ourselves

down in my clearing

all three of us

sometimes all four of us

and

M says sure okay my canarybananagoldenrodlemonyellow girl

but that’s just the way I LIKE you.

—Feb89. CD.

Drawings on loose-leaf sheets found in a sandwich bag in the roughed hollow of a birch tree on Lupine Valley property.

[A rough pencil sketch, ovoid, a potato, a potato trying to be a baby, formless, blurry.]

Title: Evie.

—Feb89. CD.

[A rough pencil sketch, a baby, human, naked, with discernible hands and feet that are formed more like the claws of birds. The talon-hands reach toward a throat, a chest, a disembodied person, maybe a woman, naked. Scratches. Gashes.]

Title: Evie.

—Feb89. CD.

Note on water-stained, loose-leaf paper found in a sandwich bag in the roughed hollow of a birch tree on Lupine Valley property.

mom says there is something

MISSING

in me

I think she has

SEEN

what I have done

fingernails and pricks and burns and bruises, cuts getting bigger

she wants me to think

up

to think UP

like my necklace, the dove

but

a GHOUL

like me it could only ever be

an anchor

too heavy

to lift my head above

its shine.

—Mar89. CD.