THIS HAPPENED THE year I won the Gold Heart for Passionata, my romantic novel of the blighted love between an Austrian composer and a troubled English girl getting psychotherapy in Vienna. I have never had any difficulty thinking up plots even though my own life has been rather short of romantic experiences. You will understand that the award and the attention it brought me were a high point, because up to then I had written forty-five books in various genres that received no praise at all except a few letters from readers. I hadn’t even attended one of the romance writers’ lunches at which the awards were presented. I was a little light-headed by the end. I still believe it wasn’t the champagne that got to me and it wasn’t the prize or the cheque or shaking the hand of one of the royal family. It was the envy in the eyes of all the other writers. Utterly intoxicating.
Whatever the reason, I can’t deny that my brain was in such a whirl when I left the Café Royal that I couldn’t think which way to turn for Waterloo Station. I believe I broke the rule of a lifetime and took a taxi. Anyway, it was a relief finally to find myself on the train to Guildford, an ordinary middle-aged lady once again – ordinary except for the drop-dead Armani gown under my padded overcoat. That little number cost me more than the value of the prize cheque. Just to be sure my triumph had really happened I took out the presentation box containing the replica Gold Heart, closed my eyes and remembered the moment when everyone had stood and applauded.
“Is that it?” a voice interrupted my reverie.
I opened my eyes. The seat next to me had been taken by a man with cropped silver hair. He was in a pinstripe suit cut rather too sharply for my taste, but smart. He had a black shirt with a silver tie and he wore dark glasses that he probably called shades.
“I beg your pardon,” I said.
“I said is that it – one day as a star and you shove off home with your gong and are never heard of again?”
I tried not to catch his eye, but I’d seen the glint of gold teeth when he spoke. I’ve never liked ostentation. Whoever he was, this person had caught me off guard. Quite how he knew so much I had no idea. I didn’t care for his forwardness or the presumption behind his question. Besides, it was the coveted Gold Heart, not a gong. I decided to let him know his interest wasn’t welcome. “If you don’t mind me saying so, it’s none of your business.”
“Don’t be like that, Dolly,” he said, giving me even more reason to object to him. My pen-name is Dolores and I insist that my friends call me that and nothing less. The man was bending his head towards me as if he didn’t want the other passengers to overhear. It’s unnerving at the best of times to be seated next to someone in a train who wants a conversation, but when they almost touch heads with you and call you Dolly, it’s enough to make a lady reach for the emergency handle. He must have sensed what I was thinking because he tried to appease me. “I was being friendly. You’re right. It’s none of my business.”
I gave a curt nod and looked away, out of the window.
Then he added, “But it could be yours.”
I ignored him.
“Business I could put your way.”
“I don’t wish to buy anything. Please leave me alone,” I said.
“I’m not selling anything. The business I mean is a runaway bestseller. Think about it. What’s this book called – Passion something?”
“Passionata.”
“It will sell a few hundred extra copies on the strength of this award. A thousand, if you’re lucky, and how much does the author take? Chickenfeed. I’m talking worldwide sales running into millions.”
“Oh, yes?” I said with an ironic curl of the lip.
“You want to know more? Step into the limo that will be waiting at the end of your street at nine tomorrow morning. It’s safe, I promise you, and it will change your life.”
I was about to ask how he knew where I lived, but he stood up, took a black fedora off the rack, held it in a kind of salute, winked, placed it on his head and moved away up the train.
I didn’t enjoy the rest of my journey home. My thoughts were in ferment. Worldwide sales running into millions? Success on a scale such as that was undreamed of, even for the writer of the best romantic novel of the year. The man was obviously talking nonsense.
Who could he possibly have been? A literary agent? A publisher? A film tycoon? I couldn’t imagine he was any of these.
I decided to forget about him and his limousine.
I think it was the anticlimax of returning to my cold suburban semi that made me reconsider. Some more of the paint on the front door had peeled off. There was a rate demand on the doormat along with the usual flyers advertising takeaways. Next door’s TV was too loud again. At least it masked the maddening drip-drip of the leaky kitchen tap. I deserved better after writing all those books.
Perhaps the award had really changed my luck.
After a troubled night, I woke early, wondering if the man in the train had been a figment of my imagination. If the car materialized, I’d know he had been real. Generally I wear jeans and an old sweater around the house. Today I put on my grey suit and white blouse, just in case. I looked out of the window more than once. All I could see at the end of the street was the greengrocer’s dirty white van.
At five to nine, I looked again and saw a gleaming black Daimler. My heart pounded. I put on my shiny black shoes with the heels, tossed my red pashmina around my shoulders, and hurried in as dignified a fashion as possible to the end of the street. The chauffeur was a grey-haired man in a grey uniform. He saluted me in a friendly fashion and opened the car door.
“Where are we going?” I asked.
“I believe it’s meant to be a surprise, ma’am.”
“You’re not telling, then?”
“That would spoil it. Make yourself comfortable. If you don’t want the TV, just press the power switch. There’s a selection of magazines and papers.”
“Will it take long?”
“About an hour.”
London, I thought, and this was confirmed when we headed along the A3. I was too interested in where we were going to look at the in-car TV or the magazines. But once we had left the main road I lost track. Before the hour was up, we were into parts of West London I didn’t know at all. Finally we stopped in front of a gate that was raised electronically, the entrance to a private estate called The Cedars with some wonderful old trees to justify the name. Even inside the estate there was a ten-minute drive past some huge redbrick mansions. I was beginning to feel intimidated.
Our destination proved to be a mock-Tudor mansion with a tiled forecourt big enough to take the Trooping of the Colour.
“Will you be driving me home after this?” I asked the chauffeur.
“It’s all arranged, ma’am,” he said, touching his cap.
The front door opened before I started up the steps. A strikingly beautiful young woman greeted me by name, my pen-name, in full. She had a mass of red-gold hair in loose curls that looked almost natural. She was wearing a dark green top, low-cut, and white designer jeans. Her face seemed familiar, but I couldn’t recall meeting her. She was younger than any of the women I’d met at the awards lunch.
“I’m so chuffed you decided to come,” she said. “Ash was dead sure he’d reeled you in, but he thinks he’s God’s gift and not everyone sees it.”
“Ash?” I said, not liking the idea that anyone had “reeled me in”.
“My old man. The sweet-talking guy in the train.”
“He made it sound like a business proposition,” I said.
“Oh, it is, and we need you on board.”
She showed me through a red-carpeted hallway into a sitting room with several huge white leather sofas. A real log fire was blazing under a copper hood in the centre. A large dog with silky white hair was lying asleep nearby.
“Coffee, Dolores?”
“That would be nice,” I said to her. “But you have the advantage of me.”
Her pretty face creased in mystification. “Come again.”
“I don’t know your name.”
She laughed. “Most people do. I’m Raven. Excuse me.” She spoke into a mobile phone. “It’s coffee for three, and hot croissants.”
Even I, with my tendency to ignore the popular press, had heard of Raven. Model, singer, actress, TV celebrity, she made headlines in whatever she’d tried. “I should have known,” I said, feeling my cheeks grow hot. “I wasn’t prepared. I was expecting someone from the publishing industry.”
“No problem,” she said. “It’s nice not to be recognized. People react to me in the dumbest ways. Did you tell anyone you were making this mystery trip?”
“No. I kept it to myself.”
“Great. You live alone – is that right?”
“Yes.”
“And you’ve written all those amazing romances?”
I glowed inwardly and responded with a modest “Some people seem to like them.”
“I’ve read every one, from Love Unspoken to Passionata,” Raven said with genuine admiration in her voice.
This came as a surprise. Her own life was high romance. She didn’t need the sort of escapism my books offered. “I’m flattered.”
“You’re a star, a wonderful writer. You deserved that award. You ought to be a best seller by now.”
I secretly agreed with her, but I’m not used to receiving praise and I found it difficult to take. “I don’t think I could handle fame. I’m rather a coward, actually. I sometimes get asked to give talks and I always turn them down.”
“Who looks after your PR?”
“No one.”
“You must have an agent.”
“I wouldn’t want one. They take a slice of your income and I can’t afford that.”
“So you do all the business stuff yourself?”
I nodded.
Raven seemed to approve. “You’re smart. If I could get shot of all my hangers-on, I would.”
At this moment a woman arrived with the coffee on a trolley.
“I wasn’t talking about you, Annie,” Raven said. “You’re a treasure. We’ll pour it ourselves.”
The woman gave a faint smile and left.
“How do you like your coffee, Dolores?”
“Black, please.”
“Same as me. Same as Ash. He’s Ashley really, like that footballer.”
I don’t follow football and I must have looked bemused, because Raven added, “Or that guy in Gone With The Wind, but no one calls him that. He’ll be with us any sec. His timing is always spot-on. Ash is smart, or he wouldn’t own a pad like this.”
Raven poured three coffees. The croissants were kept warm by a kind of cosy on the lower shelf of the trolley. Mine almost slipped off my plate at the sudden sound of husband Ashley’s voice behind me.
“Sensible girl.”
I’m not used to being called a girl, but I was junior to him by at least ten years, so I suppose it was excusable. I got a better look at him than I had when he was seated beside me in the train. He was seventy if he was a day, as wrinkled as a Medjool date. Today he was in a combat jacket and trousers and expensive trainers.
He held out his hand and I felt his coarse skin against mine. The grip was strong. My hand felt numb after he’d squeezed it.
“Can’t say I’ve read any of your stuff,” he said. “I’ve never been much of a reader. She tells me you’re the best at what you do.”
“She’s too generous,” I said.
“How much do you make in an average year?”
This wasn’t the kind of question I was used to answering. “Enough to live on,” I said.
“Yeah, but how much?”
“A writer’s income fluctuates,” I said, determined not to give a figure. “I’ve earned a living at it for fifteen years.”
“What sort of living?” he asked. “Don’t get me wrong, Dolly, but a semi on the wrong side of Guildford ain’t what I call living.”
Raven clicked her tongue. “Ash, that isn’t kind.”
He ignored her. His brown eyes fixed on me. “You put in the hours. You do good work. You deserve better. I made my first million before I was twenty-three. It was dirty work nobody wanted, so I did it. Collecting scrap from house to house. Waste management. Landfill. I’ve covered every angle. Now I have the biggest fleet of refuse lorries in the country. Ash the Trash, they call me. Doesn’t bother me. I’m proud of it. I’ve got houses in London, Bilbao, New York and San Francisco. I did skiing every year until my knees went. And I’m married to the bird half the men in the world are lusting over.”
“That’s crude,” Raven said.
“It’s a fact.” Now his eyes shifted to his young wife. “And you’re more than just a pretty face and a boob job. I rate you, sweetheart. You’ve got ideas in your head. Tell Dolly your story.” He turned to me again. “This’ll get you going.” He sat next to her on the sofa opposite mine. “Come on, my lovely. Spill it out.”
“Well,” she said, “I don’t know what Dolores will think of it. She’s a proper author.”
“She has to get ideas,” Ash said, “and that’s where you come in.”
“He never lets up,” Raven said, fluttering her false lashes at me. “It needs a bit of work, but it goes like this. There’s this little girl living in East Sheen.”
“We’ll change that,” Ash said. “Make it Richmond.”
“All right. Richmond. And when she gets to thirteen, she’s already got a figure and her mum puts her in for a beauty contest and she wins, but then one of the other girls points out that she’s underage. You had to be at least sixteen under the rules, so I was disqualified.”
“She,” Ash corrected her. “She was disqualified.”
“She.”
“We’re calling her Falcon,” Ash said.
“I was coming to that,” Raven said.
Ash turned to me. “What do you think, Dolly? Is Falcon a good name?”
“Fine,” I said, not wishing to fuel the obvious tension between husband and wife.
“OK,” Raven said. “So this girl – Falcon – has to wait until she’s older, but she learns all she can about beauty and make-up and fashion and then she enters for another contest even though she’s still only fifteen.”
“And she won a modelling contract,” Ash said.
“You’re spoiling it,” Raven said.
“That’s what happened.”
“Yes, but I’m telling it. I was building up to the modelling. You don’t come straight out with the best bit of the story, do you, Dolores?”
“Suspense is a useful device, yes,” I said.
“See?” she said to Ash. “Now shut it.”
“Before you go on,” I said to Raven. “I’m not entirely sure why you’re telling me all this.” In truth, I had a strong suspicion. “If it’s your life story and you want to get it published, surely you should write it.”
“It’s not supposed to be about me. Well, it is really, but it’s a romance. I’m leaving out the stuff I don’t want people to know.”
“And beefing up the good bits,” Ash said.
“In that case it’s autobiography dressed up as fiction. I still think you should write it yourself.”
“She can’t write,” Ash said.
“He means I’m not a writer,” Raven said. “I can spell and stuff.”
“Which is where you come in,” Ash said to me.
“We want you to do the writing,” Raven said, “give it a makeover, if you know what I mean.”
“We’re not daft,” Ash said. “Her fans will know it’s her life story and buy a million copies.”
“But if it isn’t in Raven’s own style, no one will believe she wrote it.”
“So you rough it up a bit,” Ash said to me. “Knock out the long words. Give it plenty of passion. You’re good at that, I was told. All the celebs hire someone to do the writing. It’s called ghosting.”
“I know what it’s called,” I said. “I’m sorry to disappoint you, but I’m not a ghost writer. I write original fiction. I’ve never attempted anything like this. I wouldn’t know how to start.”
“It’s all on tape,” Ash said. “You write it down, juice it up a bit and with her name on the cover we’ve got a bestseller.”
“I’m sorry,” I said. “I can’t do it.”
“Hold on. You haven’t heard the deal,” Ash said. “You walk out of here today with ten grand in fifty-pound notes. Another ninety grand on delivery, all in cash. No tax. How does that strike you?”
The figure was huge, far more than I earned usually. But what would a ghosted book do to the reputation I’d built with my forty-six novels?
Ash gave me instant reassurance. “You won’t take any flak for writing it. We’re keeping you out of it. As far as Joe Public is concerned, Raven wrote every word herself. That’s why it will be a bestseller. She’s got fans all over the world and she’ll get more when the book hits the shelves. They want the inside story of the nude modelling, the catwalks, the reality shows, the pop concerts, all the stars she’s met—”
“And how I met you,” Raven said to him. “They want to know what I see in a man forty-two years older than me.”
“True love, innit?” Ash said in all seriousness. “I’m nuts about you. That’s why I’m funding this bloody book.”
She kissed his cheek and ruffled his silver hair. “My hero.”
All this was bizarre. I was actually thinking what I could do with a hundred thousand pounds. The task of writing Raven’s life story might not be creatively fulfilling, but it was within my capability, especially if she had recorded it in her own words. “Just now you said it’s on tape.”
“God knows how many cassettes,” Ash said. “Hours and hours. She’s left nothing out.”
This disposed of one concern. Any writer prefers condensing a script to padding it.
“You take them home today, all of them,” Ash said.
“I’m not saying I’ll do it.”
“What’s the problem, Dolly? You’ve got the job.”
“But we haven’t even talked about a contract.”
“There isn’t one,” Ash said. “There’s only one thing you have to promise, apart from doing the book, and that’s to keep your mouth shut. Like I said, we’re passing this off as Raven’s book. If anyone asks, there wasn’t no ghost. She done the whole thing herself. I wasn’t born yesterday and neither was you. We’re paying well over the odds and buying your silence.”
“How soon do you expect this book to be written?”
“How long do you need? Six months?”
This seemed reasonable if it was all on tape already. I wouldn’t wish to spend more than six months away from my real writing. Heaven help me, I was almost persuaded. “And if I needed to meet Raven again to clarify anything, is that allowed for?”
“Sorry. Can’t be done,” Raven said. “I’m doing reality TV in Australia for the next few months and no one can reach me, not even Ash.”
“So you want the book written just from these tapes, without any more consultation?”
“It’s the best way,” Ash said. “Raven is so big that it’s sure to leak out if you keep on meeting her. You won’t be short of material. There’s loads of stuff on the internet.”
“What happens if you aren’t happy with my script?”
Raven answered that one. “It won’t happen. That’s why I chose you.” She fixed her big blue eyes on me. Her confidence in me was total.
I warmed to her.
“But I’m sure to get some details wrong. Anyone would, working like this.”
“She’ll straighten it out when it comes in,” Ash said. “Let’s agree a date.”
***
I must be honest. I’d been persuaded by the money. At home over the next six months I set about my task. The tapes were my source material. Raven had dictated more than enough for a substantial book, but she had a tendency to repeat herself. With skilful editing I could give it some shape. Such incidents as there were had little of the drama I put into my own books. I would have to rely on the reader identifying with “Falcon” and her steady rise to fame and fortune.
The first objective was to find a narrative voice closer to Raven’s than my own. I rewrote Chapter One several times. The process was far more demanding than Ash had predicted. “Knock out the long words,” he’d said, as if nothing else needed to be done. Eventually, through tuning my ear to Raven’s speech rhythms, I found a way of telling it that satisfied me.
The absence of a strong plot was harder to get over. Her story was depressingly predictable. A romantic novel needs conflict, some trials and setbacks, before love triumphs. I had to make the most of every vestige of disappointment, and the disqualification from the beauty contest was about all she had provided. In the end I invented a car crash, a stalker and a death in the family just to “beef it up”, as Ash had suggested.
The biggest problem of all lay waiting like a storm cloud on the horizon while I worked through the early chapters: what to do about Ash. How could I make a romantic ending out of a relationship with an elderly scrap dealer, however rich he was? If I took thirty years off his age he’d probably be insulted. If I changed his job and made him a brain surgeon or a racing driver, he’d want to know why. He was justly proud of becoming a legend in refuse collection, but it wasn’t the stuff of romantic fiction.
And I have to admit that he frightened me.
Deliberately I put off writing about him until the last possible opportunity. By then I had shaped and polished the rest of the book into a form I thought acceptable, though far from brilliant. Ash was the last big challenge.
In desperation I researched him on the internet. Being so successful, he was sure to have been interviewed by the press. Perhaps I would find some helpful insights into his personality.
I was in for a shock.
In 1992 Ash had been put on trial for murder and acquitted. His first wife, a young actress, had gone missing after having an affair with the director of a play she was in. Her family suspected Ash had killed her, but her body had never been found. The word “landfill” was bandied about among her anxious friends. Before she disappeared, she had written letters to her lover telling of mental and physical cruelty. A prosecution had been brought. Ash had walked free thanks to a brilliant defence team.
All of this would have greatly assisted the plot of the book. Of course, I dared not use it. I felt sure Ash didn’t want his dirty washing aired in Raven’s romantic novel. Nor was I certain how much Raven knew about it.
After reading several interviews online, I concluded that Ash was a dangerous man. He had defended his empire of landfill and dustcarts against a number of well-known barons of the underworld who had threatened to take over. “You don’t mess with Ash,” was one memorable quote.
For the book, I called him Aspen, made him a grieving widower of forty-nine, called his business recycling, gave him green credentials and charitable instincts. He fell in love with Falcon after meeting her at a fund-raising concert and they emigrated to East Africa and started an orphanage there. The book was finished with a week to spare. I was satisfied that it would pass as Raven’s unaided work and please her readers.
At nine on the agreed day in March, I walked to the end of my street with a large bag containing the manuscript and Raven’s tapes and stepped into the Daimler. Even after so many years of getting published I always feel nervous about submitting a script and this was magnified at least tenfold by the circumstances of this submission.
As before, the front door of the mansion was opened by Raven herself, and she looked tanned and gorgeous after her television show in Australia. “Is that it?” she asked, pointing to my bag, echoing the words Ash had used when we first met in the train.
I handed over the manuscript.
“I can’t tell you how much I’ve been waiting to read this,” she said, eyes shining.
I warned her that I’d made a number of changes to give it dramatic tension.
“Don’t worry, Dolores,” she said. “You’re the professional here. I’m sure whatever you’ve done is right for the book. Coffee is on its way and so is Ash. I’m going to make sure he reads the book, too. I don’t think he’s read a novel in the whole of his life.”
“I wouldn’t insist, if I were you,” I said quickly. “It’s not written for male readers.”
“But it’s my life story and he’s the hero.”
“I took some liberties,” I said. “He may not recognize himself.”
“What’s that?” Ash had come into the room behind me, pushing the coffee trolley. “You talking about me?”
“Good morning,” I said, frantically trying to think how to put this. “I was explaining that for the sake of the book I had you two meeting at an earlier point in life.”
“So?”
“So you’re a younger man in the story,” Raven put it more plainly than I had dared.
He frowned. “Are you saying I’m too old?”
“No way,” she said. “I’ve always told you I like a man who’s been around a bit.”
“So long as he’s got something in the bank. Speaking of which,” he said, turning to me, “we owe you ninety grand.”
“That was what we agreed,” I was bold enough to say.
His eyes slid sideways and then downwards. “Will tomorrow do? The bloody bank wanted an extra day’s notice. They’re not used to large cash withdrawals.”
“But you promised to pay me when I delivered the manuscript,” I said.
He poured the coffee. “I’ll make sure it’s delivered to you.”
“A cheque would be simpler.”
He shook his head. “Cheques can be traced back. Like I told you before, this has to be a secret deal.”
I have to say I was suspicious. It had been in my mind that Ash could easily welsh on the agreement. True, I’d been paid ten thousand pounds already, but I wanted my full entitlement.
As if he was reading my mind, Ash said to Raven, “Is the message from the bank still on the answerphone? I’d like Dolly to hear it, just to show good faith.”
“What message?” she said.
He got up and crossed the room to the phone by the window. “The message from the bank saying they wouldn’t supply the cash today.” He pressed the playback button.
Nothing was played back.
He swore. “Must have deleted it myself. Well,” he said, turning back, “you’ll have to trust me, won’t you?”
“But I don’t even have the address of this house, or a phone number, or anything.”
“Better you don’t.”
“But you know where I live.”
“Right, and so does my driver. He’ll deliver the money tomorrow afternoon.”
At that moment I acted like a feeble female outgunned by an alpha male. I left soon after, without any confidence that I would ever receive the rest of the payment.
***
Three days later I read in the paper that Ashley Parker, the landfill tycoon and husband of Raven, was dead. He had apparently overdosed on sleeping pills and lapsed into a coma from which he never emerged. He was aged seventy-two.
Raven inherited his forty-million-pound estate, and went on record as saying that she would gladly pay twice that amount to get her husband back.
The inquest into Ash’s death made interesting reading. There was some gossip in the papers that Raven had overplayed the grieving widow to allay suspicion that she had somehow administered the overdose. This was never raised at the inquest. There, she melted the hearts of the coroner and the jury. She said Ashley had always been a poor sleeper and relied on a cocktail of medication that “would have knocked out most men”. He had been happy to the last, a man with a clear conscience.
A clear conscience indeed. I never did receive the second payment for my work on the book. In fact, I have never heard from Raven since. However, she had enough sense not to publish. I believe she worked out the truth of what happened that morning I visited the house.
You see, when Ash told me I wouldn’t get paid that day, I became suspicious. I’d delivered the book and they had no further use for me, but I remained a risk to Ash’s scheme. While I was alive I could pop up any time and earn a fat fee from the papers by revealing that I had ghosted the masterpiece supposedly written by Raven. I had become disposable, ready for the landfill. Easier still, I might succumb to an overdose and no one would ever know how it happened, or connect me with Raven and Ash. I’d heard of doctored drinks known as Mickey Finns, and I could believe that some slow-acting drug might sedate me until I got home and finally kill me. And that was why after the coffee was poured I took the sensible precaution of switching my cup with Ash’s. The opportunity came when he acted out his little charade with the answerphone.
What neither of them knew is that as well as romantic novels I write whodunits.