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Index
Introduction
About This Book
Conventions Used In This Book
What You're Not to Read
Foolish Assumptions
How This Book Is Organized
Part I: Getting Ready to Write Fiction
Part II: Creating Compelling Fiction
Part III: Editing and Polishing Your Story and Characters
Part IV: Getting Published
Part V: The Part of Tens
Icons Used in This Book
Where to Go from Here
Part I
Chapter 1: Fiction Writing Basics
Setting Your Ultimate Goal As a Writer
Pinpointing Where You Are As a Writer
Freshmen: Concentrating on craft
Sophomores: Tackling the proposal
Juniors: Perfecting their pitches
Seniors: Preparing to become authors
Getting Yourself Organized
Mastering Characterization, Plotting, and Other Skills
Editing Your Fiction
Chapter 2: What Makes a Great Story?
Choosing What to Give Your Readers
Creating a powerful emotional experience: What your readers desperately want
Educating your reader
Practicing the gentle art of persuasion
Making Life Hard on Your Characters: Conflict Plus Change Equals Story
The Five Pillars of Fiction
Setting the stage: Your story world
Creating characters
Constructing the plot
Formulating a theme
Expressing your style
Seven Ways to Deliver the Goods
The here and now: Action
Giving your characters a voice: Dialogue
Revealing thoughts: Interior monologue
Feeling with your character: Interior emotion
Seeing what your character sees: Description
Taking a trip to the past: Flashback
Supplying narrative summary
Chapter 3: Finding Your Audience and Category
Identifying Your Ideal Novel
Looking at what you love to read
Thinking about what you love to write
Defining Your Ideal Reader
Considering worldview and interests
Looking at gender
Writing for readers of a certain age
Defining your niche
Understanding Your Category
Genres: Surveying categories based on content
Understanding audience-based categories
Pickingcategory and subcategory
Finding Your Category's Requirements
Targeting your word count
Accounting for major characters
Determining levels of action, romance, and all that
Identifying your story's emotional driver
Chapter 4: Four Ways to Write a Great Novel
Giving Yourself Permission to Write Badly
Creative Paradigms: Investigating Various Writing Methods
Writing without planning or editing
Editing as you go
Planning a little, writing a little
Outlining before you write
Finding a Creative Paradigm that Works for You
Understanding why method matters
Developing your creative paradigm
Using Your Creative Paradigm to Find Your Story Structure
Chapter 5: Managing Your Time . . . and Yourself
Finding Time to Write
Establishing and sticking to a writing goal — for this week and this year
Organizing your time
Setting Up Your Ideal Writing Space
Securing the best writing surface
Finding the right chair
Choosing a computer (if you want to use one)
Putting everything in place
Dealing with Distractions
Looking at Money Matters
Budgeting money for writing
Making your living as a writer: Don't expect this to be your day job (yet)
Part II
Chapter 6: Building Your Story World: The Setting for Your Story
Identifying the Parts of a Story World
Creating a Sense of Place
Making description do double duty
Fitting description in the story
Weaving emotive force into your descriptions
Deciding What Drives Your Cultural Groups
Revealing cultural drivers with immediate scene
Exposition: Explaining cultural drivers through narrative summary
Combining various elements to show cultural drivers
Choosing the Backdrop for Conflict
Defining your backdrop
Defining your story question
Story World Examples from Four Well-Known Novels
Pride and Prejudice
The Pillars of the Earth
Patriot Games
Ender's Game
Researching Your Story World
Identifying what you need to know about your story world
Knowing how much research is enough
Being Able to Explain Your Story World to Sell Your Book
Chapter 7: Creating Compelling Characters
Defining Roles: Deciding Who Goes in Your Novel
Backstory: Giving Each Character a Past
Understanding why backstory matters
Creating your character's backstory
Avoiding stereotypes
Motivation: Looking to Your Character's Future
Values: Core truths for your character
Ambitions: Getting abstract, or why Miss America wants "world peace"
Story goals: Your story's ultimate driver
Establishing your character's motivation
Point of View (POV): Getting Some Perspective on Character
First-person POV
Third-person POV
Objective third-person POV
Head-hopping POV
Omniscient POV
Second-person POV
Choosing between Past and Present Tense
Revealing Your Characters to the Reader
Chapter 8: Storyline and Three-Act Structure: The Top Layers of Your Plot
Giving the Big Picture of Story Structure: Your Storyline
Understanding the value of a storyline
Writing a great storyline
Examples: Looking at storylines for 20 best-selling novels
Three-Act Structure: Setting Up Three Disasters
Looking at the value of a three-act structure
Timing the acts and disasters
Introducing a great beginning
The end of the beginning: Getting commitment with the first disaster
Supporting the middle with a second major disaster
Leading to the end: Tackling the third disaster
Wrapping up: Why endings work — or don't
Summarizing Your Three-Act Structure for Interested Parties
Examples: Summarizing The Matarese Circle and Pride and Prejudice
Describing your own three-act structure
Chapter 9: Synopsis, Scene List, and Scene: Your Middle Layers of Plot
Deciding Which Order to Work In
Writing the Synopsis
Taking it from the top: Fleshing out your three-act structure
Bottoms up! Building around sequences of scenes
Knowing how much detail you need
Example: A synopsis of Ender's Game
Developing Your Scene List
Top-down: Fleshing out your synopsis
Bottom-up: Summarizing your manuscript
Example: A scene list of Ender's Game
Extending your scene list
Setting Up the Structure of Individual Scenes
Setting the proactive scene
Following up with the reactive scene
Coming full circle with your scenes
Scene structure in Gone With the Wind
Scene structure in Patriot Games
Chapter 10: Action, Dialogue, and More: The Lowest Layer of Your Plot
Using Seven Core Tools for Showing and Telling
Action
Dialogue
Interior emotion
Interior monologue
Description
Flashback
Narrative summary and other forms of telling
The Secret of Showing
Sorting it all out
Understanding the two kinds of clips
Writing public clips
Writing private clips
Putting cause and effect together
Chapter 11: Thinking Through Your Theme
Understanding Why Your Theme Matters
Looking at why writers include themes in their novels
Examining the features of a theme
Example themes for 20 novels
Deciding When to Identify Your Theme
Finding Your Theme
Faking it till you make it
Reading your own novel for the first time
Listening to your characters
Using test readers
Must you have a theme?
Refining Your Theme
Part III
Chapter 12: Analyzing Your Characters
The High-Level Read-Through: Preparing Yourself to Edit
Developing a Bible for Each Character
Physical traits
Emotional and family life
Intellectual and work life
Backstory and motivation
Psychoanalyzing Your Characters
Are values in conflict?
Do the values make sense from the backstory?
Does ambition follow from values?
Will the story goal satisfy the ambition?
The Narrator: Fine-Tuning Point-of-View and Voice
Does your POV strategy work?
Have you chosen the right POV character?
Is your POV consistent?
Does your character have a unique voice?
Fixing Broken Characters
Boring characters
Shallow characters
Unbelievable characters
Unlikeable characters
Chapter 13: Scrutinizing Your Story Structure
Editing Your Storyline
Removing all unnecessary weight
Keeping your characters anonymous
Staying focused
Cutting down some example storylines
Testing Your Three-Act Structure
What are your three disasters?
Are your acts balanced in length?
The beginning: Does it accelerate the story?
The first disaster: Is the call to action clear?
The second disaster: Does it support the long middle?
The third disaster: Does it force the ending?
The ending: Does it leave your reader wanting to tell others?
Scene List: Analyzing the Flow of Scenes
Rearranging your scenes
Foreshadowing: Planting clues to prepare readers
Putting it all together as a second draft
Chapter 14: Editing Your Scenes for Structure
Triage: Deciding Whether to Fix, Kill, or Leave a Scene Alone
Identifying ailing scenes
Evaluating a scene's chances of recovery
Fixing Proactive Scenes
Imagining a proactive scene: The Day of the Jackal
Checking for change
Choosing a powerful goal
Stretching out the conflict
Desperately seeking setbacks
Examining the final result
Fixing Reactive Scenes
Imagining a reactive scene: Outlander
Checking for change (again)
Fitting the reaction to the setback
Working through the dilemma
Coming to a decision
Coming to the final result
Killing an Incurable Scene
Chapter 15: Editing Your Scenes for Content
Deciding Whether to Show or Tell
Knowing when clips, flashbacks, or telling techniques are most appropriate
Following an example of decision-making
A Good Show: Editing Clips
Guidelines for editing clips
Fixing mixed clips
Fixing unintentional head-hopping
Fixing out-of-body experiences
Fixing cause-effect problems
Fixing time-scale problems
Getting In and Out of Flashbacks
Editing Telling
Tightening text and adding color
Knowing when to kill a segment of telling
Part IV
Chapter 16: Getting Ready to Sell Your Book: Polishing and Submitting
Polishing Your Manuscript
Teaming with critique buddies
Joining critique groups
Working with freelance editors
Hiring freelance proofreaders
Looking at Three Common Legal Questions
Deciding between Traditional Publishing and Self-Publishing
Understanding how traditional publishers work
Understanding how self-publishing works
Beware the vanity publishers!
Our recommendation
First Contact: Writing a Query Letter
Piecing Together a Proposal
Deciding what to include
Your cover letter: Reminding the agent who you are
Your title page
The executive summary page
Market analysis: Analyzing your competition
Your author bio
Character sketches
The dreaded synopsis
Your marketing plan
Your writing, including sample chapters (or whole manuscripts!)
Chapter 17: Approaching Agents and Editors
Defining the Roles of Agents and Editors
Finding the Best Agent for You
Deciding whether you need an agent
Doing your homework on agents first
Contacting agents to pitch your work
Editors, the Center of Your Writing Universe
Targeting a publishing house
Choosing which editor to contact
Contacting editors directly
Part V
Chapter 18: Ten Steps to Analyzing Your Story
Step 1: Write Your Storyline
Step 2: Write Your Three-Act Structure
Step 3: Define Your Characters
Step 4: Write a Short Synopsis
Step 5: Write Character Sketches
Step 6: Write a Long Synopsis
Step 7: Create Your Character Bible
Step 8: Make Your Scene List
Step 9: Analyze Your Scenes
Step 10: Write and Edit Your Story
Chapter 19: Ten Reasons Novels Are Rejected
The Category Is Wrong
Bad Mechanics and Lackluster Writing
The Target Reader Isn't Defined
The Story World Is Boring
The Storyline Is Weak
The Characters Aren't Unique and Interesting
The Author Lacks a Strong Voice
The Plot Is Predictable
The Theme Is Overbearing
The Book Fails to Deliver a Powerful Emotional Experience
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