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Index
Title Page copy
Copyright
Dedication
Blanche marched down the condo hallway with her sheaf
Set Up, Daily Life
Mall Kiosk Lady - do we need?
Condoissue —sue theme. Sal.
Prologue/Opening/Hook
Lolita attack
Do the Dragon's bidding?
Inciting incident/Catalyst
Resistence/Debate
Set up visit to kids - diane calls
Blanche and Al go for a visit
Edna was tucked into a corner of the
Tonio waited for a lady to walk by as if she might be
Enter the situation - Lunch
Unit 2
Bruce walked them around the
Dragon with Al and Blanche
Tension/Raise Stakes BAD GUYS
Reporter
Blanche thinking about the Alvaro letter
Sunny Isles
the movie star
Antonio subplot
Enter the situation/ Build Up/Tension/Raise Stakes
Build Up/Tension/Raise Stakes copy
One step forward two steps back
One step forward two steps back-1
Meet panicky greg
“Murderer
Join Forces/raise stakes
wants and needs widen in discrepancy
Greg finally handed the phone back to Blanche all rigged
Subplot continues or introduced
Discovery
Midpoint Crisis Hits
yelling about the outrage
“So the admin turns away a blind eye? What does it
“Me neither (is this midpoint really?)
Blanche booked it back to her Florida mansion bunk
At the house talk to Al and Tommy
Carlos and the movie star-1
The next morning
Honor among thieves
Office invasion
Regroup and Flee
Blanche pulled at her suitcase behind the shed with
At first, she’d run in a blind instinctive to flee
Gets home has to call Diane
trials/Building
Call the reporter and or police
Blanche opened her email and wanted to cry when she
Bad Guys close in
Threads begin to come together
Subplots getting resolved
all is lost- post Tommy, no from Sharon
Discovers something from kids
power within starts
Blanche dialed AnaRosa’s cell number. She knew service
power within
Action, couldn't have done at the beginning
Blanche repeatedly hit the check for new email button
Action, BAD GUYS
AnaRosa sat in the space across from Sally’s desk. Her
Bad Guys
Janice and Shirley trying to hide for the night
Subplots support or contrast main plot
Action/Converge
Battle/Climax/Showdown/Finale
Do we smuggle Antonio in to Unit 2 later like we did
Leaves Al at the house Finds Frank
Smoking Patio Discussion
Sweat formed on her as she waited in a laundry closet
Unit 2 break in
Shirley sent Antonio down the hall to the nurses station
Edna had her magazine pressed to her nose but was listening
Antonio to print
Bruce in his office escapes
Antonio watches
Bruce ready to run
Edna rolled through the corridors as quickly as she could
Blanche gets the trash
Bruce in the cart
Blanche gets loose
Handler stops shooting
Blanche leaves the building
As Edna got to the door of the room she saw an employee
Antonio and Shirley subdued
Al and Antonio
Frank hadn’t heard
Blanche in the dark
handler
Antonio looked down the gun
Frank knew where
Antonio knew the moment he was lost. He felt a spasm
Blanche turned and
Blanche watched helplessly
Blanche held on for dear life as Al drove erratically
Al felt sweat all over him. He didn’t have the control
Blanche realized
Al pulled up at the main dock, but it looked empty
Resolution, wrap up and slow down/Final Image
Resolution, wrap up and slow down/Final Image-1
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